typos and etc

[PanzerGuitar00]

missing period

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

2 more of the above

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

Pretty sure this is meant to say "green-feathered Tove"

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

noticed the missing puntuation here, too

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

mayvbe also add a comm after "udders"

 

[Theron]

You know your entire lower body is getting filthy with it, but the Lion-Pros have you by the balls

Missing '.'

You wanted to... cum some more, and luckily, you do.

A custom wide-brimmed hate originally made for Johana Creed

Your eyes bear a vertical slit instead of rounded pupils, each surrounded by a brightly beaming a fiery blue iris.

You pant like a horny bitch as the changes finish, leaving you with a korgonne pussy.The fur on your limbs shimmers brightly. You do a double-take, but by the time you look back, it has already changed color. You have white fur now!

Seems to be a problem with the fur color TF, specifically. Same pattern when after other effects.

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

misiing space at the start and end of the highlight

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

missing space

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

extra space

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

maybe add a paragraph to separate the notification thingy from the rest of the text

 

[Skunkupine]

Carrie & Cora, milking stall - pronoun trouble:
"I’m sure if she knew of a few places round here, he’d take us somewhere..."
"he'd" should be "she'd" for my Steele.

 

[Skunkupine]

Carrie and Cora, swimming hole:
"The black one-piece swimsuit you purchase is unspectacular but cheap, in your size, and looks like it’ll get the job done."
But my Steele is already wearing Nova configured as a swimsuit...

Edit: wearing bra and panties is preventing the swimsuit from being recognized.

 

[Skunkupine]

Carrie & Cora:
"There’s going to be no problems there. each of your bulbous cocks practically steam [....]"

Missing capitalization at beginning of the second sentence.

 

[Skunkupine]

Kiro BJ:
"One that cares and is down milk me better than any machine ever could?"
Should be "[...]and is down to milk me [....]"

Also, an observation: It's a shame this scene, like so many, does not handle the concept of Steele having Red Myr Venom - seeing Kiro overdriven on that would have been fun.

 

[Skunkupine]

Carrie and Cora, swing:
Observation: Doesn't take into account Steeles who can fly.

 

[Skunkupine]

Male Behemoth anal:
"Despite the sheer difference in size between you and the kaiju, her quartet of huge breasts in time with your plowing; it’s almost hypnotic!"
I can haz verb?
Maybe something like "[...] her quartet of huge breasts bouncing in time with your plowing; [....]"