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XBoxMaster131

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This line is abit of an oversight, as on repeat encounters you already know who she is. it even says so in the previous paragraph

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Theron

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Shalin Hunter said:
the Shalin Hunter’s wings limply continue to beat, weakening with each flutter before they give up entirely, their body crashing to the ground.
Should probably be capitalized, 'his'?

Your attack forces the Hunter from the air. His outstretched wings billow, taking his weight as he lands on the uneven moss with a thump. He glares at you, and then, with wings still outstretched, stalks towards you.

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Smuggler, used Mag Binders on him. This is the round he recovered from Stun (he's not Flying again, yet).

He takes a flapping half-step, half-leap towards you, rising into the air only to reach his legs out and slash his knife-long, viciously sharp talons across your body. Claws of titanium strength rip through you. You are ruptured!
Not actually Ruptured. I'm pretty sure the attack missed.

You swing at the Shalin Hunter. It easily avoids your attack.

Grenades don't interrupt his Illusions anymore?
 
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