typos and etc

[XBoxMaster131]

actually iy may be a stylistic thing, cuz here it was very likely intentianal

 

[XBoxMaster131]

This line is abit of an oversight, as on repeat encounters you already know who she is. it even says so in the previous paragraph

 

[Madam Materia]

Small additional space here in Akane's "forced orgasm" sex scene.

 

[Madam Materia]

Xhanni got that double tail for tailing about her Peers.

 

[Madam Materia]

Accidental additional capitalization of the I in "with" here. Xhanni's sex scene, educate with dick.

 

[Madam Materia]

Loose is missing an E here. Xhanni post-sex-choice scene passing time.

 

[Theron]

0.9.130-PUBLIC#6093

the Shalin Hunter’s wings limply continue to beat, weakening with each flutter before they give up entirely, their body crashing to the ground.

Should probably be capitalized, 'his'?

Your attack forces the Hunter from the air. His outstretched wings billow, taking his weight as he lands on the uneven moss with a thump. He glares at you, and then, with wings still outstretched, stalks towards you.

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Smuggler, used Mag Binders on him. This is the round he recovered from Stun (he's not Flying again, yet).

He takes a flapping half-step, half-leap towards you, rising into the air only to reach his legs out and slash his knife-long, viciously sharp talons across your body. Claws of titanium strength rip through you. You are ruptured!

Not actually Ruptured. I'm pretty sure the attack missed.

You swing at the Shalin Hunter. It easily avoids your attack.

Grenades don't interrupt his Illusions anymore?

 

[Madam Materia]

The executress's name is wrong on her portrait. The game refers to her as "Dova", but there's an "h" in her portrait for some reason.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

change to stares

 

[XBoxMaster131]

missing the rest of the parser

 

[XBoxMaster131]

change to you're

 

[XBoxMaster131]

change to due to a

 

[XBoxMaster131]

maybe remove the hyphen

 

[v3hemenc3]

shouldn't that be "surrounded" instead of "surrendered"?

 

[XBoxMaster131]

for some reason i can plow the Jumper Interceptor with grav cuffs even when it says that im too big for her other scenes

 

[XBoxMaster131]

missing space

 

[XBoxMaster131]

tooltip is a bit of an incosistency if you have more than three dongs

 

[XBoxMaster131]

add in the

 

[Loneranger69]

Mating frenzy with the Naleen. Probably shouldn't have a 1 in there

 

[Madam Materia]

Unless it's my Treatment and low in making tummy a person, should probably be "your tummy's" Third Gryvain preg message with the F1RST enemy ifmy counting is accurate.

 

[Loneranger69]

Having Mirrin's baby. Should probably be "bit" instead of "big"