Edan's brosex "catch" variant:
1. Your beast-cock throbs powerfully in your handas it simultaneously starts to unload a literal torrent of thick jism all over Edan’s couch.
2. Your beast-cock throbs powerfully in your handas it simultaneously starts to unload a literal torrent of thick jism all over Edan’s couch. <- new sentence
3. It could be just your submissive side speaking, but the thought of being his personal sex toy sounds really, really hot. <- these two words have too much space in between them ingame.
4. Without warning, the stud pushes himself balls-deep into your narrow, moist ass and, with a guttural groan, starts to cum. <- there shouldn't be a comma after the word "and"
5. You can feel the impact of each thrust with blissful clarity, filling you to the core and making a bulge in your belly just before his cum-heavy sack claps against your own massive nuts. Meanwhile, your stallion-bitchbreaker dangles to the rhythm of his movements, dripping wild ropes of thick precum all over Edan’s leather couch.
your boycunt roughly and without interruption for several minutes, using you as a cocksleeve just like he promised. At this rate, however, it’s no surprise that he doesn’t last long. As Edan gets closer and closer to his own selfish climax, his back plates start to glow an increasingly bright yellow, lighting the living room. <- there are seemingly some words missing between these two paragraphs
