Typos and Etc

[XBoxMaster131]

change to "even the cheapest thing is"

 

[XBoxMaster131]

change the comma to a semicolon

 

[XBoxMaster131]

maybe remove, or otherwise edit, this section. as is it just breaks the flow of the sentence

 

[XBoxMaster131]

replace the comma with a colon or semicolon, or maybe flat out put it in its own paragraph. dealers choice

 

[XBoxMaster131]

maybe remove "as if" and replace "stage" with "scene"

 

[XBoxMaster131]

remove the comma

 

[XBoxMaster131]

pretty sure the painting descriptions should be in the reverse order. as it is now its kinda confusing. i thought for a moment i would have to place the inscriptions in the right order to solve a puzzle or something.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

two things. one, change to password. two, theres no option to back out, so if you dont know the password youre basically softlocked

 

[XBoxMaster131]

change "it" in the tooltip to "if"

 

[XBoxMaster131]

change to "senile". makes more sense.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

missing spaces after ellipses

 

[XBoxMaster131]

there isnt a single thing that refers to a pregancy test in this dungeon. massive oversight.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

you can run from the fight with Ahsha, and if you do th game acts like you won it

 

[XBoxMaster131]

extra random quotation mark

 

[XBoxMaster131]

change to "be a dig"

 

[XBoxMaster131]

maybe add a space after "pistol"

 

[XBoxMaster131]

missing quotation marks and italics are buggy

 

[XBoxMaster131]

change to "on"

 

[Theron]

The paralysis affecting the machina seems to wear off, motion returning to his limbs!

Should probably be 'it's' to be consistent.

 

[Jacques00]

Hopefully all fixed for the next release.

pretty sure the painting descriptions should be in the reverse order. as it is now its kinda confusing. i thought for a moment i would have to place the inscriptions in the right order to solve a puzzle or something.

I think this is intentional based on the order in how each image in the set is described. I didn't find anything in the quest document to add on, so I just added a small blurb at the end where the player character realizes the caption order discrepancy after viewing the images.

there isnt a single thing that refers to a pregancy test in this dungeon. massive oversight.

Seems like the text for when that is found was missing. It should be added now.

you can run from the fight with Ahsha, and if you do th game acts like you won it

I've made this fight in particular disable fleeing, though I'm not sure if the other two fights (guard and mistress) require that limitation as well.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

replace with "back"

Spoiler

 

[Jacques00]

Fixed for the next release.

 

[Madam Materia]

Typo in Hana's initial rescue scene (highlighted below). Should be "yet every so often...".

 

[Madam Materia]

I am assuming that this is supposed to be "The ausar quickly meanders off to her desk,"


EDIT: Ardia & Syri DP scene on first interaction (after recruiting Syri and finding the pair of them playing games), not sure if it's the same as their normal sex scenes.

 

[Madam Materia]

More in the same scene. I'm assuming it's missing the word "fill" for "as you fill her/it with white hot seed".

 

[Jacques00]

Hopefully all fixed for the next release.

 

[Theron]

There’s a ringing shot and a dull ache of impact
, even through your shields.
Critical hit! Your shield crackles but holds.

First two lines appear in different boxes.

 

[Jacques00]

Hopefully fixed for the next release.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

maybe remove this section, as it doesnt really fit with the rest of the sentence.

Spoiler

 

[XBoxMaster131]

noticed some issues wit Tika. im pretty sure the interactions and such for when her breasts are large/small have been swapped, somehow, even the tooltips

for instance, here shes talking about her tits like their normal, but as you can see from the option and image thats not the case.

also, italics glitch

maybe also remove the "t1k4 or" bit from her name thingy