Typos and Etc

[XBoxMaster131]

change to "even the cheapest thing is"

 

[XBoxMaster131]

change the comma to a semicolon

 

[XBoxMaster131]

maybe remove, or otherwise edit, this section. as is it just breaks the flow of the sentence

 

[XBoxMaster131]

replace the comma with a colon or semicolon, or maybe flat out put it in its own paragraph. dealers choice

 

[XBoxMaster131]

maybe remove "as if" and replace "stage" with "scene"

 

[XBoxMaster131]

remove the comma

 

[XBoxMaster131]

pretty sure the painting descriptions should be in the reverse order. as it is now its kinda confusing. i thought for a moment i would have to place the inscriptions in the right order to solve a puzzle or something.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

two things. one, change to password. two, theres no option to back out, so if you dont know the password youre basically softlocked

 

[XBoxMaster131]

change "it" in the tooltip to "if"

 

[XBoxMaster131]

change to "senile". makes more sense.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

missing spaces after ellipses

 

[XBoxMaster131]

there isnt a single thing that refers to a pregancy test in this dungeon. massive oversight.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

you can run from the fight with Ahsha, and if you do th game acts like you won it

 

[XBoxMaster131]

extra random quotation mark

 

[XBoxMaster131]

change to "be a dig"

 

[XBoxMaster131]

maybe add a space after "pistol"

 

[XBoxMaster131]

missing quotation marks and italics are buggy

 

[XBoxMaster131]

change to "on"

 

[Theron]

The paralysis affecting the machina seems to wear off, motion returning to his limbs!

Should probably be 'it's' to be consistent.

 

[Jacques00]

Hopefully all fixed for the next release.

pretty sure the painting descriptions should be in the reverse order. as it is now its kinda confusing. i thought for a moment i would have to place the inscriptions in the right order to solve a puzzle or something.

I think this is intentional based on the order in how each image in the set is described. I didn't find anything in the quest document to add on, so I just added a small blurb at the end where the player character realizes the caption order discrepancy after viewing the images.

there isnt a single thing that refers to a pregancy test in this dungeon. massive oversight.

Seems like the text for when that is found was missing. It should be added now.

you can run from the fight with Ahsha, and if you do th game acts like you won it

I've made this fight in particular disable fleeing, though I'm not sure if the other two fights (guard and mistress) require that limitation as well.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

replace with "back"

Spoiler

 

[Jacques00]

Fixed for the next release.