Typos and Etc
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Myabe change to "not a bad technique" or just "not bad". As is it reads kinda weird. Sorry for being so nitpicky
Hi, new here, hope I'm doing this right. (And hope this doesn't violate the "don't necromance threads" rule; this one didn't seem that old, but I don't know what the cutoff would be. Anyway, I thought it'd be nicer not to have a new post for every individual typo/language error.)
Should be "as you approach" or "at your approach", I think.
Should be "as you approach" or "at your approach", I think.
Something not quite right with the grammar of this sentence, I think. Starting at "your bed" it switches to a list of places where you can hang the poster it seems, but then it should probably be something like "via the "Decorate" button, such as your bed", etc.
Hello and welcome! And yeah you're doing it all right, don't worry.
I think this should say "Playing along," at the start. (I'm guessing just a partial screengrab like this should be enough to find the relevant text in the game, right?)
Unless this is something to do with the lore of the universe or something or some dialect or slang I'm unfamiliar with, I think the word here should be spelled "clobber" rather than "klobber".
The tooltip here implies theres a cheat we can use to reset Ambers drug addiction, but i dont see it. Im assuming its going to be added in the future, correct?
Maiden Vanae after a tease:
A few seconds later she jerks her webbed back, flushing wildly.
I assume that should be "her webbed hand back".
A few seconds later she jerks her webbed back, flushing wildly.
I assume that should be "her webbed hand back".
Minor typo on Ancient Warbot:
With an ear-gouging whine of rusted metal, the missile launch withdraws into the warbot.
I think that should be "missle launcher".
With an ear-gouging whine of rusted metal, the missile launch withdraws into the warbot.
I think that should be "missle launcher".
For some reason Harru at the milk bar has her name displayed even when you have never interacted with her. maybe make it so its listed as "Peer" or something. Also, if you dont choose any options upon first interacting with her and just leave, it will play her intro dialouge when you speak to her again.
Also, because once yuou enter the milk bar you get put into dialouge with Iyla, its pretty easy to miss Harru's button and assume something is bugged.
Also, because once yuou enter the milk bar you get put into dialouge with Iyla, its pretty easy to miss Harru's button and assume something is bugged.
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