Typos and Etc

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XBoxMaster131

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Dont know if this counts as a bug which is why im putting it here, but for some reason you always get a message at the end of the soaked raskvel scene saying that youve been gaped, even when youre stretchy enough that no actual changes happen. May just be an oversight or part of the actual scene rather than a modification notification, idk
 

XBoxMaster131

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Missing period, and it feels like the sentence was cut off somehow. Maybe ask the author if this is how its supposed to be.

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XBoxMaster131

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Something kinda similar in the soaked rask throatfuck scene, it feels like there should be one more paragraph or sentence saying how you get up and continue on, but no, it just ends.

Sorry if im being too nitpicky

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Ganger heavy A’s muscles strain as she hoists a Glacial Auger barehanded. The repurposed magma miner ices its drill with a puff of coolant while she spins it up to a decidedly unhealthy RPM. Aiming right at your center mass, she charges forward!Quick-stepping aside, you artfully dodge the incoming auger. The ganger lunges at empty air, her long-bore tool revving fruitlessly. If you wanted another hole in your body, you’d sooner take a mod for it.
Ganger heavy A revs her industrial hardware only for it to sputter to a gradual stop. She clicks her tongue in annoyance. With practiced ease, her tail ejects the old energy cartridge from the machine and she slams a fresh one home. With an underhanded toss, she whips the empty cell at your feet.The girl’s throw is a bit too hard, pitching the battery over your shoulder. It cracks against a building wall, its chemical contents eating away at concrete like it were wet cardboard.
With her attention fixed wholly on you, ganger heavy A revs her massive weapon again and again. The auger’s spinning corkscrew shaft begins overheating so she pulls a ripcord at its side and releases a torrent of coolant that sprays down its shaft and sends the excess ice right at you! Error: unknown pronoun specifier. dive for a wide trash can and crouch as best you can, letting the graffiti-painted bin take the brunt of the icy cascade. By the time it’s over, the cylinder is frozen solid. Good thing that wasn’t you!
 

Skunkupine

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In the Tove Codex entry:
"toves often accompany spoke work with the movement of"
I think that should be "spoken words"
 

Skunkupine

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In one of Anyxine's scenes, multiple parser didn't parse:
The tint’s not completely opaque when you’re this close, and the flush of {high exhib|arousal|involuntary shame}

down the curve of your back and through your {callipygian|thick, bouncy|tight little] asscheeks.
 

Skunkupine

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In the Dhaal Wander scene of the madam dressing down her charge:
Watching the exotic sex unfold has a hot effect on your libido.A sensation
Missing space after period.
 

Skunkupine

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On the new Mia content: when selecting vaginal sex, the option of which penis is given, but then in the text the option is overridden: "“Quick request: use your smallest dick." Should the option be given if it's going to be overridden?
 

Skunkupine

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Riley 4th of July scene: "you’re able to get ahold of one of Riley’s cannonball’s again. " No, apostrophe is not Latin for "LOOK OUT HERE COMES AN 'S'!" - should be cannonballs.
 

Skunkupine

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Encounters page:

Jade: Met her
┕ Nipple Treatment: Suggested, Talked about, Paid for, Used Nipplelux, Completed

No indention on the entries for Jade.
 

XBoxMaster131

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Dont know what heppened here tbh. The log doesnt seem to be updating properly. Not to mention the status in progress thingy.


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XBoxMaster131

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For some reason when you choose a sex scene for the peer cyberdolls, the portrait swaps back to the group of peer vips. Pic for proof


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