Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!

[PanzerGuitar00]

I think they meant to say "woozy" here, b ut im not sure...


When you finally wake up, your head feels wooly, and your body strangely hot. Checking your Codex, you realize there’s an email from Lumi.

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

remove "the" from the perk description

Spoiler

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

missing period


We talked about what we were going to do after getting out of Dhaal safely. None of us wanted to work for someone else, and a couple of my boys already knew how to cook and behave, so after talking to a friend of mine he suggested that I could start a diner. At first, I wasn’t too convinced, but that same friend originally owned this place, and gave me a good deal on it. He’d shut it down a while back and hadn’t gotten a chance to sell it yet, so he was more than happy to get it off his back.”

“How do you like the new job?” You ask

“I mean, I do miss the mercenary gigs. But I do like this line of work. Safe work. Ultimately, though, I care about getting to stick with my boys,” she finishes with a smile.

 

[Jarylan]

Behemoth transformation sequence, cock growing specifically. We seem to be missing a noun in here.

Without warning, your smooth twitches strongly against the fabric of your underwear, making you stop in your tracks.

Edit: Another one in the genital slit mutation. Is it possible the parser is calling an empty string?

It’s like your behemoth is moving on its own inside your underwear, rubbing against your thighs in a very distracting way.

 

[Balek Crisp]

Here to toss one in! This is SyriQuest flirt scene for the male. Pretty sure that it should be "Really? I thought the whole office knew I was a slut!"

Myrra giggles, wrapping her arms under her mammoth tits. “Really? I thought the whole office thought I was a slut!”

 

[Jarylan]

Mounting scene with Amber on the ship. This quotation mark needs to be moved back, next to "that".

“Can’t say no to that, you murmur,” rearing up and positioning yourself behind the needy taurgirl.

 

[Jarylan]

Should be they rather than the. Scene is going with Anyxine down to the hot springs. Character is half-leithan, though I don't know if this scene varies based on that or not.

When the open, you’re hit with a billowing wave of wet heat that seems to fight back the moon’s deep freeze with everything it’s got, welcoming you into a lobby that seems like a blessed relief from Uveto itself.

 

[Jacques00]

Hopefully all fixed up to this point.

 

[Jarylan]

Prone bone scene at Anyxine's apartment after a date. Should be "when" I would think.

she’s got such potent top energy that she doesn’t know what to do with herself with she lets that go for even a moment.

 

[Balek Crisp]

You wake up to the sensation of Bess drawing her pronounced nipples over you, trailing them along your skin. “...Morning, " + bessPCName() + ".” Her voice practically purrs.

 

[LeDoraggo]

On the "Racial Score" screen in the codex, specifically in the Kaithrit section. Pretty sure it's meant to say "non-furred"

Spoiler: Screenshot

 

[Jarylan]

Was having another nice session at Vava Groom when I noticed this. I think what was meant was likely "arch your back and moan".

You are almost driven to arch your moan when he runs his fingers along your spine,

 

[Jarylan]

Taur play with Paulette. I think this is meant to be mattress, not matters.

The chromed-up cutie giggles, making her ripe, watermelon-sized boobs quake in alluring waves before throwing her forelegs onto the matters.

 

[Jarylan]

That new yinglet transformative has a typo, should be lower case here. Gosh, who wrote this crap? (It was me. Mea culpa.)

With the next step you take, your Legs nearly give out.

And another...

Your Prehensile legs stretch themselves out in digitigrade form, with extremely long and thin lower legs, with short, thick thighs above them.

 

[Jarylan]

Found another...sorry dorry. Still Zhat Zhing candy related. There seems to be a problem with adjectives for some reason, they're getting capitalized when they shouldn't be...

You feel a sudden tingling and warm sensation in your Animalistic dick that is very pleasurable.

 

[Jarylan]

Zhat Zhing still, cock tf. I must have given the wrong parser code. This should only mention lower under garments...

The very action of it rubbing against your plain bra and plain panties is enough to make you wobble unsteadily. You can't help it, you have to do something about this…

 

[Jarylan]

Yeah, there's definitely something weird going on here with the parser. So many unnecessary capitalizations.

crying out in pleasure as your new cock fires a stream of Frosting into the air.

 

[Jarylan]

I think this is extraneous "e", but suddenly am unsure on the spelling, despite the fact that I wrote it...

but a momentary probing finds your missing phallus just inside inside the sheathe and behind

 

[Jarylan]

Zhat Zhing tf still. It seems to keep telling me my breasts are shrinking, but they're still the same size every time. Wasn't this also a bug with some other transformative? Bat Bites I think? Might be a problem with lactation size modifiers or something.

A warm, pleasant feeling grows in your chest, and you feel lighter. Looking down, you notice that your breasts seem smaller, receding into your body slowly. The lighter weight on your chest makes it easier to move quickly and easily. You have C-cup breasts now.

 

[Jarylan]

Another strange parser capitalization... This is in the appearance tab, still testing bits of the new yinglet TF.

A coat of Gold fur covers your arms, which feature very long and thin forearms. Your hands are paw like, with three two-jointed fingers, with

 

[Jarylan]

Another strange one, but should be easy to correct. Anytime yinglet comes up in reference to body parts on these screens, it's always in all caps.

 

[LeDoraggo]

From the Black Pill tf. "Your" should probably not be capitalized. Missing space after a period, then missing a period (Not sure if that's how that type of dots are called, english isn't my first language)

With a final pat-down, you note that Your breasts have shrunk and are now a couple cup-sizes smaller.Not only that, but your nipples are back to normal size Well, it is not like bothrioc are known for their big boobs. Not even Fei An Strozo, feminine as she was, had breasts last you saw her.

 

[LeDoraggo]

From the Black Pill tf. "Your" should probably not be capitalized. Missing space after a period, then missing a period (Not sure if that's how that type of dots are called, english isn't my first language)

With a final pat-down, you note that Your breasts have shrunk and are now a couple cup-sizes smaller.Not only that, but your nipples are back to normal size Well, it is not like bothrioc are known for their big boobs. Not even Fei An Strozo, feminine as she was, had breasts last you saw her.

Another one, though i'm unsure if this is a bug, but the Tf describes me losing my fur, even though i didn't had any at that moment

Spoiler: Screenshot

 

[LeDoraggo]

Yet another one from Black Pill. Missing comma between "distance" and "it looks like"

A few minutes later, your shiny new skin hardens into a firm-but-flexible black chitin. From a distance it looks like you are wearing a pair of latex gloves and high-heel boots.

 

[LeDoraggo]

Appearance blurb for Bothrioc Quadomme-type Legs (taur bothrioc). Replace "Your" with "You"

A second pair of legs stand back-to-back to your front pair, holding your torso up like a mythological drider. Your can walk around using all four legs with relative ease and agility.

 

[LeDoraggo]

Appearance blurb for Bothrioc Quadomme-type Legs (taur bothrioc). Replace "Your" with "You"

A second pair of legs stand back-to-back to your front pair, holding your torso up like a mythological drider. Your can walk around using all four legs with relative ease and agility.

Also, as a side note, shouldn't the Bothrioc face type have the "Chitinous" tag, since it's said it's partially covered in chitin in some places, or is it not how the tag works?

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

a message from a pregnancy my pc was doubled, and they keep being doubled. save included. this is the jana preg to be specific.

Spoiler

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

Maybe change "are" to "is" and "pregnant" to "pregnancy", not 100% on the second one tho, and even the first one is a bit iffy, but i guess thats just because of the parser...

Your stomach grows larger by the day, making more space for the developing kui-tan pup inside you. Your fur are drawn tight, and your walking is slowed down by your pregnant gut, making it harder to get around. Your inhuman cunt is sopping wet, the pregnant hormones driving your lust up the wall, making you constantly think about a dick splitting your slit open.

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

change is to are, maybe remove the, and missing period



You have to take it slow now that your belly is rounded and swollen, making you walk with a gait. Your smothering mounds is also incredibly sensitive, making you shudder if the fabric or even wind brushes over them.

Your breasts are leaking more milk than before, the hormones making you produce more food for your offspring. The constant leaking of milk making it even harder for you to wear anything over your chest

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

remove "a"



“I know I already said it, but I can’t thank you enough,” she says again as she hugs you from behind, her chin resting on your shoulder, and both of her hands cradling your stomach. You spend a good while just cuddling and basking in the shared affection for your unborn child. But as much as you wish you could stay, you have to move on again, so with a one last kiss you leave her office.