With the new legged Venus Pitcher, every single ellipses is missing the space that comes afterward, when applicable.
Im not gonna show them. Im sorry but it would literally drive me insane. just do a blanket check and place the spaces where they are needed.
also, missing period
The dryad’s tendrils come fast. You’re faster — throwing yourself clear as the crack splits the air where you were standing. She regards where she stands, tendrils slowly recoiling. “Hmph.” Then she’s gone, folding herself back into her pod with a final, decisive schlutch
maybe change "they" to "you"
There’s a package at your feet. You push it lightly with your foot, just enough to read the print: Estrobloom - bloom into the feminine flower they always deserved to be! You barely have time to register it when a rustling draws your attention.
maybe add a comma after "oh"
Oh this again. You already ran into a venus pitcher that tried this song and dance on you, and it worked so very, very well. Every erogenous zone on your body begins to tingle and engorge at the memory of your submission.
Im not gonna show them. Im sorry but it would literally drive me insane. just do a blanket check and place the spaces where they are needed.
also, missing period
The dryad’s tendrils come fast. You’re faster — throwing yourself clear as the crack splits the air where you were standing. She regards where she stands, tendrils slowly recoiling. “Hmph.” Then she’s gone, folding herself back into her pod with a final, decisive schlutch
maybe change "they" to "you"
There’s a package at your feet. You push it lightly with your foot, just enough to read the print: Estrobloom - bloom into the feminine flower they always deserved to be! You barely have time to register it when a rustling draws your attention.
maybe add a comma after "oh"
Oh this again. You already ran into a venus pitcher that tried this song and dance on you, and it worked so very, very well. Every erogenous zone on your body begins to tingle and engorge at the memory of your submission.
