Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!
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Hopefully all fixed for the next release, up to this point.
My mistake, I must have copied the part of Nym-Foe's scene with the intention of filling in Doll Maker-related text, but then had forgotten about it when I was in the middle of fixing something else.
Hopefully fixed for the next release. For her combat naming, only one flag was being checked to see if the player character knows her name (complying with her), so if you missed that scene, she would still be a stranger in combat. Other flags that unlock her name should now be checked.
Ok correct me if im wrong, but didnt adjatha make a bust for the female sex bots on tavros? im not seeing it in the image options for some reason.....
For some reason, you can ask the good dr badger to repair nym foe, even when shes already repaired.
save included for testing
save included for testing
missing period
“Hell if I know,” the cyborg replies, shrugging. “I’m just a contractor. Maybe they bought an old warehouse full of them and decided to empty out their inventory or something.” She pauses, studying your face. “Anyway, thanks again for your help, lover girl”
“Hell if I know,” the cyborg replies, shrugging. “I’m just a contractor. Maybe they bought an old warehouse full of them and decided to empty out their inventory or something.” She pauses, studying your face. “Anyway, thanks again for your help, lover girl”
maybe change to "Zero Plus carefully maintains her medical equipment. She smoothly puts her polished tools down before taking care of her most important accessory: a stuffed bear wearing a white blouse, a stethoscope, and a head mirror." I removed the dentist stuff because it doesnt really make much sense to state that specifically, imo, but you can leave it in if you want.
Zero Plus carefully maintains her medical equipment. She smoothly put her polished dentist’s tools down before taking care of her most important accessory: a stuffed bear wearing a white blouse, a stethoscope, and a frontal mirror.
Zero Plus carefully maintains her medical equipment. She smoothly put her polished dentist’s tools down before taking care of her most important accessory: a stuffed bear wearing a white blouse, a stethoscope, and a frontal mirror.
Speaking of, she still has the talk option for sabre enabled even though they havent met, which i recall you stating that you had fixed. though maybe i had selected the talk option before, then saved over it, and that borked something? Im not sure regardless, thought id bring it up to be thorough. save included.
Maybe change up the zap to make it stand out a tad more. unitalicize or bolden it or something. sorry this ones nitpicky, next one will be an actual issue lol
“I dunno. Sometimes my brain goes zzap! and thousands of silly wordies and numbies fly in my head before everything goes back to normal.
“I dunno. Sometimes my brain goes zzap! and thousands of silly wordies and numbies fly in my head before everything goes back to normal.
maybe add "that" in front of "they've and "they're" also im not
The arguments about them online are well warranted. There were no pads in that bra, it’s all her. They’re so big they’re spheres of tight flesh at their bottoms, wrapping around the base of her ribcage and towards her sides now they’ve been set free. Her nipples sit slightly upturned and perky, swollen from her arousal to the size of a thumbtip on pale pink tea saucer areola. And yet, they look just the slightest bit too small for the massive globes they adorn.
The arguments about them online are well warranted. There were no pads in that bra, it’s all her. They’re so big they’re spheres of tight flesh at their bottoms, wrapping around the base of her ribcage and towards her sides now they’ve been set free. Her nipples sit slightly upturned and perky, swollen from her arousal to the size of a thumbtip on pale pink tea saucer areola. And yet, they look just the slightest bit too small for the massive globes they adorn.
What does this word even mean? someone else asked about it a while back ive tried google, but nothing and nobody gets any results. hell google just brings me to the forum post of someone else asking about it!
“This... this was my reward for somebody else’s mistake. From someone playing hero - and failing. It came when my dear husband got himself killed trying to save someone else.... I don’t want to talk about it, traveler.” Her tone is gravelly, stern with the unmistakable harsh edge of somebody speaking through gritted teeth. A sore subject, obviously. “I am haleogentic. I can’t ‘fix’ it. I don’t want to fix it. Don’t ask about it again.”
“This... this was my reward for somebody else’s mistake. From someone playing hero - and failing. It came when my dear husband got himself killed trying to save someone else.... I don’t want to talk about it, traveler.” Her tone is gravelly, stern with the unmistakable harsh edge of somebody speaking through gritted teeth. A sore subject, obviously. “I am haleogentic. I can’t ‘fix’ it. I don’t want to fix it. Don’t ask about it again.”
change "by" to "with"
You ought to feel pleased by yourself: a clap on the shoulders and a few surreptitious fingernail scrapings were all it took to get your hands on Steele’s prototype immune system.
You ought to feel pleased by yourself: a clap on the shoulders and a few surreptitious fingernail scrapings were all it took to get your hands on Steele’s prototype immune system.
during the velika mission, the leave button is always shown, even after youve, well, left reading the terminal logs on the computer.
maybe remove the comma. yeah another nitpick sorry lol
Several bulky, yellow EVA suits sit in lockers adjacent to the ship’s principal airlock.
Several bulky, yellow EVA suits sit in lockers adjacent to the ship’s principal airlock.
maybe add an ellipses after "catch up"
She turns you about, pressing her forehead against yours, her blonde hair falling around you like a curtain. “I missed you. And as much as I’d love to drag you to a dark corner somewhere and... catch up I’ve got a few things to knock off my to-do list while I’m on this rock. Come and find me at the Crash Landing later.
She turns you about, pressing her forehead against yours, her blonde hair falling around you like a curtain. “I missed you. And as much as I’d love to drag you to a dark corner somewhere and... catch up I’ve got a few things to knock off my to-do list while I’m on this rock. Come and find me at the Crash Landing later.
