Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!

[PanzerGuitar00]

change to "cheek"


She places another kiss on your cheeks before heading toward the bulkhead for a quick trip to the Little Blossoms Shelter.

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

When you recruit Zero Plus directly from the quest, why does she have the Sabre talk option available even if she hasnt met them? seems weird to me.

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

maybe change to "pharmaceutical". could be other instances of this, maybe do a sweep for them to be thorough

Zero Plus firmly kneads her pharmacy tits. The bouncy girl releases a lurid moan before her tail splurts warm, creamy ooze all over your back. You gasp and shiver as the slick liquid spreads across your muscles.

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

change to "she's", and maybe uncapitalize the second chop

“She’d here for her daily checkup,” Zero Plus answers. “Go get changed Paullie. I need my bestest friend with me for this,” she says, loading her arms with robotic pieces and glossy clothes before pushing her into the side room. “Now, where were we? Right! I’ll need you to get all buckie nakie for this. Chop Chop!”

also in this same scene is an italics glitch

Spoiler

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

The tooltip is broken upon recruiting Zero Plus, though that may be because i have so many crewmates on board....

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

Even post quest, Zero Plus' dialouge still reads as though you are on the EGG. dont know if it affects the other talk/sex/etc scenes. Also, while we're here, change "techs" to "tech"