Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!

[PanzerGuitar00]

change to "cheek"


She places another kiss on your cheeks before heading toward the bulkhead for a quick trip to the Little Blossoms Shelter.

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

When you recruit Zero Plus directly from the quest, why does she have the Sabre talk option available even if she hasnt met them? seems weird to me.

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

maybe change to "pharmaceutical". could be other instances of this, maybe do a sweep for them to be thorough

Zero Plus firmly kneads her pharmacy tits. The bouncy girl releases a lurid moan before her tail splurts warm, creamy ooze all over your back. You gasp and shiver as the slick liquid spreads across your muscles.

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

change to "she's", and maybe uncapitalize the second chop

“She’d here for her daily checkup,” Zero Plus answers. “Go get changed Paullie. I need my bestest friend with me for this,” she says, loading her arms with robotic pieces and glossy clothes before pushing her into the side room. “Now, where were we? Right! I’ll need you to get all buckie nakie for this. Chop Chop!”

also in this same scene is an italics glitch

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[PanzerGuitar00]

The tooltip is broken upon recruiting Zero Plus, though that may be because i have so many crewmates on board....

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

Even post quest, Zero Plus' dialouge still reads as though you are on the EGG. dont know if it affects the other talk/sex/etc scenes. Also, while we're here, change "techs" to "tech"

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

some issues with nym foe and dollmaker that didnt really warrant making a thread

for starters, the option to ask badger to fix the nym foe doesnt appear until after you loot her

next, with the doll maker, the tooltip will aways say "you need x part", and never "x part is already installed", which is pretty confusing. you can see so in my save.

Also in my save, you can see that even though i have only removed the iq b gone syringe, badger still says that "everything is still here". that statement is also contradictory to the previous paragraph. is everything there? is stuff missing? its confusing.

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i hope i wasnt being confusing with explaining all this.

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

maybe change to "while your"


Your gigantic gonads make it impossible for you to move at all, you luckily have a remedy for that... Activating the anti-gravity switches on your undergarments, you quickly feel the immobilizing weight being lifted off the ground! Now you can travel with ease... more or less.

 

[Jarylan]

Found a small issue with Night Bites, missing punctuation at the end of this sentence.

There’s a stretching sensation at the sides of your head like someone pulling taffy as they grow back out and reshape, becoming wide and pointed, as well as gaining a soft new coating of fur.

 

[Jarylan]

Small issue with auto-fellatio, I believe a function called this string incorrectly. In this case my character only has a four inch cock.

You can only take a good seven or eight inches in before physics prevents you from taking things any farther, but it’s still plenty. You’ve got your hands to please the rest.

 

[LeDoraggo]

For some reason after paulettes Quest ends, it plops you onto Tavros, which i pretty weird since all of the dialouge implies that you didnt leave the planet.

Weird, i did the quest a few weeks ago, and it left me on Dhaal's spaceport. Maybe it's a glitch on your end?

 

[LeDoraggo]

Feel like this could be changed to "Oh, good..." or "Oh God", or something else. Idk, always felt weird to read for some reason

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[LeDoraggo]

Also, this happens every time you interact with TIKA without exiting her interaction screen (closing her shop menu, hitting "Next" after being done with her only talk option while at FIRST-14, acepting/rejecting her SSTD immunity treatement). I believe only the upper text (forgot to mark it, since i'm an idiot) should be visible in these cases, while the lower should be visible whenever you interact with her on subsecuent times after already meeting her

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[PanzerGuitar00]

Weird, i did the quest a few weeks ago, and it left me on Dhaal's spaceport. Maybe it's a glitch on your end?

thats.... odd.... well, heres a file from when im still on the egg so jaques can do some testing