Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!

[Jarylan]

Took a closer look at the Vanae Huntress on Mhen'ga and found this one. Missing word, probably tail?

Meanwhile her whips around as she ‘dances’, another weapon in the alien girl’s natural arsenal.

Edit: The above error also affects the Vanae maiden, as well as this missing word error. However, I don't know what should go here. Once again, this is using Closer Look.

Her and short skirt, not to mention her tiny breasts, make her look almost girlish

 

[Jarylan]

Strange consistency error here when fighting Dane. I wonder why it only mentions he's blind some of the time?

 

[Jarylan]

Found another interesting one when fighting the Vanae Huntress. It's probably also true of the maiden. Grammar error, should be "prevents any of the lust-inducing liquid from seeping into it."

Suddenly, the busty huntress grabs the sides of her big, milk-filled mammaries. She squeezes them and squirts a stream of milk at you. You are splattered with her violet milk! Fortunately for you, your Atma Armor Mk. I is watertight and prevents any of the lust-inducing liquid to seep into it.

Edit: Confirmed, the error also applies to the maiden.

 

[Jarylan]

Talking to Colenso about work. Should be "rather than", perhaps. Or maybe "as anyone else".

may as well be a U.G.C. shadow operative that helps me do it than anyone else.