Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!
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Change to.... idk actually.... but i cant help but feel like this isnt the proper word here
Since she isn’t alimented properly, the small amount of silicone left in her tail shoots out with a weak intensity
Since she isn’t alimented properly, the small amount of silicone left in her tail shoots out with a weak intensity
Again, not a typo, but when choosing to get "Upgraded" by Nym-Foe, it... plays the scene twice? its hard to explain. Go through it yourself and youll be able to see what I mean.
remove the first "her"
When you enter her chambers, Penny looks at you sidelong just before her cock erupts, blasting a spermy load directly into her gullet. She makes a show of passionately suckling her at her boner
When you enter her chambers, Penny looks at you sidelong just before her cock erupts, blasting a spermy load directly into her gullet. She makes a show of passionately suckling her at her boner
Mostly fixed for the next release up to this point.
The words itself is fine, albeit probably archaic and rarely used, but I've rephrased the sentence so it reads a bit better.
You'll have to provide a save file for this and any sample text that of the scene that is repeating itself.
AHA! Ok, i think i know whats going on. When Nym-Foe "upgrades" you, Steele blacks out during the procedure, and theres supposed to be a switch to a new scene where you wake up post op and go about your biz. But i think somehow the text from the former got copy pasted into the latter, so it looks like it repeats.
So I guess it kinda is a typo, just a REALLY big one, lol!
Heres a save file just in case, though.
Gave over savicite to Kimber and found some repeated ideas here. Seems like there should be a fork, probably based on whether you have high or low exhibition. But instead, it just shoves out both lines currently, regardless of exhibition. (Or whatever else it might be testing against. Labido?)
She chuckles a little. “Sorry, didn’t mean to eye you like that, but that stuff got me good.”
You tell her it’s fine, it’s not like nobody’s ever looked at you like that before. But you guess that’s not something she can use for her work.
That’s not what you’re into, so it’s probably for the best. But you guess that’s not something she can use for her work.
She chuckles a little. “Sorry, didn’t mean to eye you like that, but that stuff got me good.”
You tell her it’s fine, it’s not like nobody’s ever looked at you like that before. But you guess that’s not something she can use for her work.
That’s not what you’re into, so it’s probably for the best. But you guess that’s not something she can use for her work.
Found this one when greeting the Rodenian mechanic. If she had mentioned something about jobs, this would make sense, but it doesn't... Could change the end to "her job", or could rephrase it as "Why don't you go do your job and hit some rocks or something..."
"Hey!” You wave at the swearing mouse-woman non-threateningly.
She doesn’t look up. “Whatever it is, I don’t have time for it. Why don’t you go hit some rocks or something and stop trying to bother the girl who’s just doing hers.”
"Hey!” You wave at the swearing mouse-woman non-threateningly.
She doesn’t look up. “Whatever it is, I don’t have time for it. Why don’t you go hit some rocks or something and stop trying to bother the girl who’s just doing hers.”
Was fighting Argosh and noticed that his title isn't capitalized consistently. Is it Technical Chief Argosh, or Technical chief Argosh? I think the first works better, at the very least Technical on his in-battle name should be capitalized. Looks very odd as is.
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Found another tile issue, but this one is sort of a typo. If the crack was twenty feet across, even the most massive warbot could probably get their arm into it. I suspect it was meant to be twenty feet deep. Dunno if a picture of the tile locations helps, but I got it anyway.
To the south is a small crack in the ice, maybe twenty feet across, and too narrow to even reach an arm down into.
To the south is a small crack in the ice, maybe twenty feet across, and too narrow to even reach an arm down into.
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Continuity issue? At the very least, the spatial arrangement seems odd. If you're lying on your back, you are facing up and have your chest and stomach upward. If Cruff is working on your back, though, it suggests you're laying on your stomach, facing down, with your back up. There's no indication Steele being moved between these two lines.
You wind up on your back, arms and legs held level.
...
The fhan’i’s slim digits spread across your face at the same time as the kalabast’s wide paws massage your back, and the effect is one of deep relaxation...
You wind up on your back, arms and legs held level.
...
The fhan’i’s slim digits spread across your face at the same time as the kalabast’s wide paws massage your back, and the effect is one of deep relaxation...
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"Characters" would work better than "letters" here. This is on Dhaal just south into the alley leading to Gobtown, checking Rivet's graffiti.
there’s a sequence of small zaika letters written vertically that your Codex automatically translates as numbers.
there’s a sequence of small zaika letters written vertically that your Codex automatically translates as numbers.
Dhaal again, North of Gobtown. Think this is leftover from back before Gobtown was added to Dhaal. Maybe use west instead of south here, since you still can't go west, but you can go south.
One of the city’s vast, pneumatic trash disposal pipes ruptured just to the south, and the evidence is everywhere. Rotten food piles in the crevices. The air reeks worse than a garbage dump. To the south, the wall of piled detritus prevents any form of land-bound travel. The owners of several franchised garbage trucks appear to be in an argument with a pair of mechanics in Bright Water jumpsuits about who has jurisdiction over the mess - and the payout.
One of the city’s vast, pneumatic trash disposal pipes ruptured just to the south, and the evidence is everywhere. Rotten food piles in the crevices. The air reeks worse than a garbage dump. To the south, the wall of piled detritus prevents any form of land-bound travel. The owners of several franchised garbage trucks appear to be in an argument with a pair of mechanics in Bright Water jumpsuits about who has jurisdiction over the mess - and the payout.
Meeting the Gabilani Chemist for the first time, missing punctuation here.
Ya know, I was starting to worry I wasn’t gonna get another test subject for my latest batch of product till you showed up. Zaika are too resilient to give me the kind of data you weaker races produce” She casually chomps and gulps down a mouthful of spit. “You’re going to be worth missing my shift at the milk-bar...”
Ya know, I was starting to worry I wasn’t gonna get another test subject for my latest batch of product till you showed up. Zaika are too resilient to give me the kind of data you weaker races produce” She casually chomps and gulps down a mouthful of spit. “You’re going to be worth missing my shift at the milk-bar...”
Defeated the Gabilani Chemist via lust. Seems we're missing a noun here. Perhaps butt? Rump? Rear end? Or maybe word order? The Gabilani slumps quivering to the ground? At first seems an odd way to start the sentence too, unless the next one starts with "Then", but that's more a stylistic choice.
At first, the gabilani’s quivering slumps to the ground. Lusty secretions pour down her inner thighs in winding rivers despite the floss still guarding her slit’s exhausted modesty.
At first, the gabilani’s quivering slumps to the ground. Lusty secretions pour down her inner thighs in winding rivers despite the floss still guarding her slit’s exhausted modesty.
Consistency issue, as well as description issues at Dhaal's cyberclinic. The room on the warp cheat menu is called the Implantation Station. Inside the tile, it's described as the Implant Station. And when you buy from Sabrae, well...
You make the transaction and Sabrae cheerfully hands your chosen mod over to you. “Thanks for shopping at the Implantation Implant Station! Don’t forget to ask about our free installation service!” she chirps. “Sorry, I have to say that.”
“Every time?” you inquire.
“Every time,” she confirms.
Also, when you browse the utility implants, it reads...
You let her know that you’re ready to make a purchase, and Sabrae allows you your pick of her combat implants.
You make the transaction and Sabrae cheerfully hands your chosen mod over to you. “Thanks for shopping at the Implantation Implant Station! Don’t forget to ask about our free installation service!” she chirps. “Sorry, I have to say that.”
“Every time?” you inquire.
“Every time,” she confirms.
Also, when you browse the utility implants, it reads...
You let her know that you’re ready to make a purchase, and Sabrae allows you your pick of her combat implants.