Found the game today and I will say the following:
The game is GREAT. There are a few things that can be improved as the minor bugs that appear from time to time but generally is quite well done.
-Things that seem to need quite a bit of work I would say that perhaps better interactions (for now they seem very basic, just talking, arguing and sex scenes mostly), it's not like it is truly necessary because it seems that the game is quite focused on the sex scenes but I think it's a bit of a shame that it isn't a bit improved.
-The new version with BDSM and femdom however didn't truly achieve it's feeling. I would say that it starts weird and ends a bit more weird. What I feel about the character of Sharon is that she is very assertive (in fact she is the assertiveness teacher!) however it isn't truly felt on the scenes with her. She is the perfect one to be a dominatrix, so it would be more expected foot and oral worship or even more extreme things like using a dildo on your ass or things like that.
Personally I would recommend a few changes, she shouldn't take you because you took her daughter's virginity, but she should do it because of jealously, meaning an high affection/seduction level but seeing that you aren't pleasing her as you should but her daughter, it would make more sense on that way (at least in my opinnion), like "I will show you who is the one that you should be pleasing".
If you want to expand on that way I think it would be a good thing to add an "assertiveness" stat to the girls that influence the sex scenes and that you with your powers can influence it by lowering it or increasing it.
-Finally the only thing that could be asked is a few things to do that give you exp outside of sex, other part time job? and perhaps that the npcs can initiate actions with you when they like you/love you (or dislike/hate you).
Even if it seems that there are many things that I critic a bit is because I actually liked the game a lot, which was quite a surprise for me. If I'm a bit lucky in my personal life I will be able to personally support you on your patreon. This is a game with ultimited potential I must say.
P.D: I recommend that you edit your initial post giving the correct blog and adding your patreon page, it would make it easier for people to visit it.