Replying on my phone so I don't have access to the game logs.
A couple more errors. Slave David path. Played all the way from selecting the MC specialty to the end selecting David as my slave. I saw the meditation scene but it doesn't update in the gallery. Also on that path, when selecting next time I will use your mouth and choosing negotiate, I get a trace back error something like Actor_Training_Level1 undefined when the dream slutty slave event triggers. I would imagine it would happen with use your hand as well but I ran out of time to test it.
Now some dialogue things, Asa Inari path. When you talk to the Inari to set it up, your truth line is I want to see Asa and Chloe have sex. Which is just wrong. Ashe shore leave. Bridge to far bridge is mispelled
Found the other MC as female but dialog indicates male, in the captains office near the end of the game, line is a couple of years ago you wouldn't have me as a first officer as a male MC. Same line is used for female MC.
Now some thoughts about the game. Ashe path to shore leave is probably the best part of the game for me. The way you develop the interactions throughout the story to lead to her thinking about doing things with the MC is great. And you get a bonus shot of her ass in chapter 1.
You have two male characters you can interact with on shore leave that near as I can tell lead nowhere right now. Plus the weird guy in the buffer. For a female MC who really wanted a male slave you spend a lot of time sexing up the ladies. But not all the ladies. Unlike TOS, where Kirk hit on every alien chick he saw, your MC, male or female gets no action with this side of the galaxy's gals. Sure he spends a bunch of time in the buff with Nali, thank you for that, but then she gets sent away. Then I don't get to see how Cea manages to get memory sucking electrodes on Rin while sexing her. I want to see what makes her so hot that she is hanging around the infirmary. Now we have the rebel from episode 1 who we never see again, and her companions that are never mentioned after the fight scene. Shouldn't we be trying to save them too? What about a little time trying out the bed in the brig with your prisoner? There is a great way to extract info, just ask Chloe.
Oh one set of renders stands out by not matching dialog. If you negotiate, the image after the Nali section where you meet up with the rest of your team is correct. But you use that image in the other path as well and the central figure in the image is the character you just rescued where the dialog previous is we should have brought more armor. She should be nude there.
Love long hair Rachel, not a big fan of the hack job she did at the end but I understand how it fits the story.
I think that it for now.