PLAN B

[Karakara]

The angle I was going for was "socially inexperienced tsundere". You think I can't pull it off?

e: maybe I'm not communicating my thoughts as well as I could be. I apparently have a really bad habit of that. Rest assured, I have a plan for Raizel and her character, just trust.

I was more so curious on how you will write her opening up/softening while keeping her seemingly callous/self-centered during sex without it feeling jarring. Than I remembered that PC could just be into that kind of treatment (like me) and that we could separate bedroom stuff from romance.

I am in full support of contradiction of terms when it comes to smut.

 

[Sidrake]

Not an other Octavia in snake version please, I really not like that. But, if I understand we havn't many dom in game, I hope not have an other one this is too much.

I trust you to do a good content and interresting story with Raizel until the end we have a true treasure we can love like Zo, or Aileh (after all, their background story is rich and very interresting, Zo a mystery monk who decide doesn't restore her voice after hurted, Aileh, adoptive daughter of a demon who never know the love but in the end she truly love the pg with kindness).

I hope see a Raizel learn to know us and trust us to evolve in a true lover with a true love story, because I must be honest even is an adult game I'm a little bored too found so many man and girl in game with soo empty background where the only reason they love you is because your the PG and nothing more.

I think we have Cait, Lyric, Kyioko, Ahmri/Atani (but is more hero syndrome I think for her), Rindo, Tetsuya, Hana, Zo, Aileh, Ryn, Dalhiza, and perhaps Varena ( hope not forgot other^^ but think not) have a true love story, a rich background and a really good reason to love the Pg.

All the other (and they are many) have no reason to love until you not tell them, it's always a empty story with them. But is my opinion so I just hope I can add a new true lover with that amazing sneak girl with a true reason to love her.

To resume my think do what you want B and don't worry. I just hope you not create an other dom monster like we have with Octavia or Kalysea and hope see a woman who hurted by life and in the end, found with the pg, her other half, she can love and trust.

Whisper : (however if you add tranformative like Ryn and Cait for her breast and other, I'm not complain XD)

 

[MarcoPolo121]

Raizel is a fully naga woman, with a snake-like lower body and a cobra-like upper body, but with arms, a torso, and breasts, because of course. She's directly inspired by the Vipers from XCom 2. She's also futa (sorry if you hate that).

See, this sounds like it could be great. I love the X-Com reboot games, and Vipers do indeed make me feel something something. And her being a futa didn't have to be a dealbreaker...

I also intend to write pregnancy content for her as my submission for this year's Mayternity.

This also sounds promising.

As a lover, Raizel is selfish and aggressive: she only cares about her pleasure, and your own is secondary. You cumming is a nice bonus, but if she doesn't, you're continuing until she does. [...] (her sex scenes won't really change wrt who's on top, her aggression, etc, mostly because that'd be three times the work and Savin only has so much money and patience).

...Aaaaand there's the other shoe.

Look, I don't mean to kinkshame anyone, but I have zero interest in fucking any more dommy, selfish, and/or aggressive futas in this game or any other. It's not just that my tastes align elsewhere outside this one apparently well-demanded niche, but all too often, they are coded to only allow a very particular dynamic, i.e. us as the (masochistic) sub to their (sadistic) dom, in their sex scenes regardless of their other merits. And I've hit a hard limit on how much I can stomach this. I think Kalysea broke something in me, y'know like I can't even go back to the NPCS I used to enjoy before now. Which is a real shame.

 

[SmithEK]

Will she be impregnating champ or is she getting pregnant? Or both?

 

[Karakara]

I hope that there will be a scene where she cradles pregnant champ all possessively and protectively. I just want her to obsesses over our gravid state.