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[OreoLuma]

Hello everyone, have you ever thought the amount of sheepfolk in this game is concerningly low? Well fear not! Over the past half year I’ve been writing a new character alongside Acehangman.

Here's a half-elf, half-sheep girl that came north looking for her parents and got caught in the Winter City during the recent events. She's got a small quest to introduce herself and might decide to take the Champ as a mate. We are not ready to submit her until I (luma) get another project accepted, but we wanted to get some feedback on her character, story and sex scenes.

Her name is Acacia Xynox and her google doc will be posted below. She is a skilled dyer. Please leave your thoughts and opinions here or on the doc.

This isn't being submitted yet. Parsers are highlighted and this is a QoL feature to help people that aren't trained reviewers and might get lost in them.

Acacia has been submitted!

Acacia doc

 

[Ace Hangman]

I may have helped with some of the editing a little. Maybe left one or two (maybe three) comments. I know it's a lot of stuff that isn't purely sex scenes and helping edit a character that the writer plans to have more things (but is limited by page count) added later can be tough to figure out what to put forth initially. I know there's more sex scenes in the master doc, but Luma wanted her introduction, story, and family aspect available to set her continuing quest for her mother up later.

I hope the amount of non-sex backstory isn't too distracting and Luma's work and effort is appreciated. I liked her so much while reading her I wrote her Eat Out scene just to see how hard accounting for parsers was when dealing with things like differing pregStages (thankfully not put in here), multicocks, her new lustRange parser that accounts for her getting needier and hornier the longer she's neglected or teased. And that was some real hard work. Props to writers who make the effort and put them in, but dang do those sections eat up your page count.

Does anyone have thoughts on the layout? Should Tabs be used more here (whether just public viewing, not strictly when submitted)? To set off the Intro, Quest, Talking, and Sex Scenes? Does that make it easier when jumping around, or is just the one expansive list workable?

 

[Lostname475]

I think the current layout works fine
Added a bit of feedback, but overall very nice stuff, hope it gets accepted

 

[OreoLuma]

I think the current layout works fine
Added a bit of feedback, but overall very nice stuff, hope it gets accepted

We are making changes to the doc and your feedback is much appreciated! I'm glad you enjoyed the frosty sheepgirl.

 

[OreoLuma]

We have gotten some feedback from others on the discord and Savin. Acacia needed some changes to fit into the world better.

Please give the doc a read through if you haven't and we are happy with all the feedback and support.

 

[OreoLuma]

After looking over the doc we have decided to submit Acacia. Thank you to everyone that helped out and for taking a look at the frosty sheepgirl!

 

[OreoLuma]

Me and Ace have been working on Acacia still. She might only have 3 sex scenes in her doc but we have around 6 in our master doc. So we are building up content for her but her initial stuff is gonna be a little lacking.

I would also like to happily announce that I will be working on a Clementine marriage expansion. If you have any ideas or content you want to see let me know!

 

[Cerneu]

I would also like to happily announce that I will be working on a Clementine marriage expansion. If you have any ideas or content you want to see let me know!

Oh please please let us have some kind of Underclothes made from her wool. We can already shear Clementine and Noire, yet nothing is ever done with the wool left behind, which I always thought was a huge missed opportunity.

It's also mentioned in the Codex page for Sheepfolk:

As the wooly helpers of Belhar and now the greater world, sheepfolk as a society share one common and central piece of culture — shearing. Many sheepfolk wind up marrying childhood friends that help with their first shearings, while older ones often offer it as a romantic encounter. Braiding and weaving their wool into clothes or tools is often seen as a way to wish others good luck, while the rejection of these can leave a sheepfolk disappointed. As simple as they may appear to be, all sheepfolk take great pride in the quality and use of their wool for and by others.

 

[OreoLuma]

Oh please please let us have some kind of Underclothes made from her wool. We can already shear Clementine and Noire, yet nothing is ever done with the wool left behind, which I always thought was a huge missed opportunity.

In my pregnancy expansion for Clementine, you're given a wool sweater by her and your children.

But yes I do plan for more stuff like this. It was always weird she never gives you anything made from her wool considering how many times the Player can shear her.

 

[OreoLuma]

I'm about 20 pages into the marriage doc. Finishing up the actual ceremony part. Just curious, what kind of new scenes would people like to see for Clementine? If anyone has any ideas feel free to share.

 

[Tarnakus]

Maybe some scene with special dress (wedding dress?) -> but somehow also made to be repeatable not just one time after ceremony.

Other idea -> Clementine taking care of PC rut or PC taking care of her heat (albeit I do not know if sheep-folk has one in CoC2 lore).

 

[OreoLuma]

Maybe some scene with special dress (wedding dress?) -> but somehow also made to be repeatable not just one time after ceremony.

Other idea -> Clementine taking care of PC rut or PC taking care of her heat (albeit I do not know if sheep-folk has one in CoC2 lore).

Sheepfolk (sadly) don't go into heat. A scene of Clementine taking care of PC's rut does sound nice and I do plan to have a repeatable scene with Clementine in her wedding dress as well. Just unsure what position it should be.

 

[OreoLuma]

I need some ideas for Clementine marriage doc. I need another date scene, I already have one where her and PC go on a picnic date.

Anyone got some ideas? Just need something wholesome and sweet. Was thinking of fishing but I think that could work.

 

[LeDoraggo]

Anyone got some ideas? Just need something wholesome and sweet

I know it's kinda repetitive at this point, since you can do so with plenty of characters already, but it's mentioned plenty that Clementine loves baking. Maybe doing something related to that? Like baking with her and stuff?

 

[OreoLuma]

I know it's kinda repetitive at this point, since you can do so with plenty of characters already, but it's mentioned plenty that Clementine loves baking. Maybe doing something related to that? Like baking with her and stuff?

That's an amazing idea! I have no idea why I didn't think of that but I'll write a date scene where PC and Clementine together.

Thank you!

 

[OreoLuma]

Hello everyone, hope you're having a good day! After the surprise of yesterday and getting another one of my Clementine scenes in I'm looking forward to writing more.

I'm using this post to keep everyone updated just in case you're looking forward to my content.

Firstly about the Marriage expansion for Clementine. The doc is about 35 pages right now. The overall expansion will include these scenes:
-Ceremony and marrying Clementine.
-3 new dates with one being optional. (Baking, picnic date and if the PC has wings, flying her around.) You are required to do at least the picnic date and another one to marry her.
-Headpats
-Taking a bath together
-New pregstage 5 (can only happen if she's married)

For new sex scenes, These will be only unlocked after marrying her.
-Married sex (banging her with wedding dress on)
-Facesitting
-Full Nelson
-Rut quelling (done, needs editing and more parsers)
-An optional sex scene while on the flying around date.
Note: All scenes I write will have dual cock support.

Feel free to suggest ideas and features! I intend for this to be a big expansion and if gets over 100 pages I'll just spilt it into two docs.

As for Acacia, me and Acehangman have been slowly working on her (I've been focusing a lot on Clementine). We have written her corrupt appearance and a little pregnant stuff too. We do have 3 new scenes for her: Sofa fucking, Sixty-nine and Cowgirl.

We are having some troubles with her future questline but hopefully it works out in the end.

Thank you for reading this and please share your thoughts!

 

[NinjaTacos]

Are you writing any scenes/will it be possible to progress with her for non-penis-having PCs?

 

[OreoLuma]

Are you writing any scenes/will it be possible to progress with her for non-penis-having PCs?

I apologize but the only scene I'll be writing that doesn't require PC having a penis will be facesitting. However, you can still marry Clementine without a cock. All you need to do is just the dates and have fucked her before (she already has an option for non-dick PCs).