Jstar's Treasure Trove
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He's a prettyboy, but I wouldn't call him a femboy tho; he's got some masculinity to him. It's how the artist portrays him.
I will take your word for it. Though I think he would look pretty in female garb. Scratch that, he would look pretty in anything because, my god, I love his design, especially with the slightly sleepy look. I just want to pick him up and... Ahem, I hope he comes out soon.
If nothing but for the sake of candor, I have to admit I’m anticipating this white-haired bishiboy far more than I’m proud of, eheh.
I just read through the thread and now realized he's going to be an actual character!? (Pending approval ofc.) YES!
He's a dweeb but he's got a good heart.
As long as he's not a xenophobic guy, a spineless guy, an overly proud guy, a -dere guy...
I’d be hard pressed to deny my excitement. Great work!
I read a little just to know his vibe but stopped before actual romance content (stopped after something old 2) since I wanna experience that firsthand, I love him, he's such a good dweeb, how you and Aly write bimbo champ is so good, I don't play one since most of the other writers seem to focus on the hypersexed part, but I love how sweet and bubbly she is here!
In one of his sex scenes, a horny champ lunges at Tetsuya and the two of them start fucking then and there on the floor.
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Couple of notes from someone that read most of it.
While I can not exactly remember how other pregnancies treated the pronouns of choice for our character if we played as a cboy/male herms, I do find it little weird how in some instances you use proper parental titles like "dad" and sometimes you substitute to it with neutral words like parent. I think you only used it few times, but it feels weird -- especially when the female noun you used is in the vain of mom.
The pregnancy talk read little bit tackles and mood killer. Now, this is coming from a guy and I am not sure how our female readers feel about it, but his sudden proclamation on how he can not hold himself back from knocking us up... While I get that is a warning, it makes him look desperate in non sexy kind of way. I think there are ways to make his "need for breed" a lot more arousing and compelling, since there is something inherently empowering in idea that a guy can not really hold himself back around you. Especially when you can expirience it from the safety of your computer/phone/tablet.
I am kind of suprised, and glad, that you still involve Kiyoko. The scenes are sweet.
While I can not exactly remember how other pregnancies treated the pronouns of choice for our character if we played as a cboy/male herms, I do find it little weird how in some instances you use proper parental titles like "dad" and sometimes you substitute to it with neutral words like parent. I think you only used it few times, but it feels weird -- especially when the female noun you used is in the vain of mom.
The pregnancy talk read little bit tackles and mood killer. Now, this is coming from a guy and I am not sure how our female readers feel about it, but his sudden proclamation on how he can not hold himself back from knocking us up... While I get that is a warning, it makes him look desperate in non sexy kind of way. I think there are ways to make his "need for breed" a lot more arousing and compelling, since there is something inherently empowering in idea that a guy can not really hold himself back around you. Especially when you can expirience it from the safety of your computer/phone/tablet.
I am kind of suprised, and glad, that you still involve Kiyoko. The scenes are sweet.
Fuck yet, male marriage!
Oh, I get that. My small gripe with it is just how unsexy it feels. Since it our first time with him, I guess I expected something more romantic to come out of it. Example:
If champs refuses, they kiss Tetty on the cheek and tease him for being such a good boy for respecting your boundaries.
If they accept that you will be assembling a kit, you shout "Less talking, more fucking" and kiss him all over.
Otherwise, it serves it purpose.
If champs refuses, they kiss Tetty on the cheek and tease him for being such a good boy for respecting your boundaries.
If they accept that you will be assembling a kit, you shout "Less talking, more fucking" and kiss him all over.
Otherwise, it serves it purpose.
Lupine Dungeon is currently WIP. She is there if she got kidnapped.
Edit: If you reach Drifa before 3 days have passed since she was kidnapped, you can save her before anything bad happens.
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On top of IRL events being hectic during the November-December period, it was very rough, but I don't intend to not write the checks my mouth makes. I don't really bounce around docs, but I do go from one doc to another in sequence.
It's a piece that I'd ideally like to have when it comes around.
https://www.patreon.com/posts/future-plans-77786877
I'm doing a poll to see what I should do next after I finish the Lupine Dungeon. The options are:
-More Drifa Content
-More Tetsuya Content
-More Corrupted Lupine Content
-New NPC: Big Titty Ghost GF
I'm doing a poll to see what I should do next after I finish the Lupine Dungeon. The options are:
-More Drifa Content
-More Tetsuya Content
-More Corrupted Lupine Content
-New NPC: Big Titty Ghost GF