Got some time on my hands and since I've already given some feedback once, I might as well do it twice.
- When defeated by enemies they will more often than not taunt you. They seem to be especially fond on calling you a 'Sissy'. Problem is, I am already playing as either a Hermaphrodite or a Dickgirl. A 'Sissy' more often than not refers to an effeminate Male, especially in sexual contexts making it rather redundant in the context of a Dickgirl or Hermaphrodite. I kinda doubt you're using it in the context of being weak, but if you do, you may want to add other taunts such as "weakling" so that it's more obvious they're calling you weak.
- A small, but jarring line during the first meeting with the Council Head Hert Lom, is when he introduces his daughter. ("Well, I'm Council Head Hert Lom, and this" points to the young woman "is my daughter Eva"). The (points to the young woman) is very bad writing to be honest. Although it conveys what's happening, it's also very blunt and crude. I'm no expert at writing myself, but I would try something more like ("Well, I'm Council Head Hert Lom, and this-" Hert/Mr. Lom points his hand towards the young woman besides him. "-is my daughter Eva"). You'll want to dictate who performs any actions as to not cause any confusion, even if it seems obvious. You'll also want to use the dash to connect two different dialogues if they're separated my an action so that they don't appear as two entirely separate sentences.
- Remember to Capitalize all of the first letters in a new sentence. There are a lot of missing capitalizations in Hert Lom's dialogue.
- The town guards will always ask who you are and you will always have to say you're a trader. Not sure if this is updated in the 1.2.11 update or not, but it would be nice if they'd remember you so you can freely enter and leave once you're proven to be friendly.
- The hide of a lizard sells for 5 Silver, but the hide of Mutant Dogs whom are much stronger only sells for 2 Silver? Either the values are switched or the hide of dogs should be worth more.
- On a second note, after you've finished looting you still get the option to loot, even if nothing remains. Would be a nice to have to go away after you've looted everything.
- During dominant or consensual sex, the player has TWO options for anal. One works normally, the other locks you into only fucking the others ass until you end the scene.
- After defeat, choosing 'Give In' will cause you to end up saying dominant things despite being the one that should be dominated. Example: (You take off the second raider's clothes, leaving her completely naked. "You're gonna make a nice fuck toy fucking whore") This coming from the defeated doesn't really fit.
- Trying to trade with Lorise at Kala's trading post will always return a Internal Server Error.
This is all I've got right now. Might try and see if I can find anything else that I can give feedback on.