Clementine Pregnancy Expansion [Summitted]

[OreoLuma]

Hello, My name is Luma.
I've been writing this for the past month. If you wanna check out the doc, link is below.
If you have any questions, please dm me on discord my username is Luma#2025. Apologizes about the parser, We weren't sure how to do it. Any help or tips with would be appreciated greatly!

Clementine Pregnancy Expansion

 

[Dr>_Irrelevant]

I've taken a quick look through it, and I like what I see. The thread seemed to disappear for a little while, so I was worried it got taken down. Glad to see that it's still here.

 

[OreoLuma]

I've taken a quick look through it, and I like what I see. The thread seemed to disappear for a little while, so I was worried it got taken down. Glad to see that it's still here.

Apologizes for the late response, The thread was taken down because it needed approval from a moderator.
Thank you for the kind words! Me and my editor are still working on improving the overall quality of the doc. I recommend anyone to check back in a week to see the changes and new scene we are adding.
If you have any questions or suggestions please feel free to share them, either it be here or on discord.

 

[A1teros]

I really hope this gets put in after whatever revision and review process is standard for these, good luck!

 

[OreoLuma]

Hello everyone, I hope your having a wonderful day. With this post I wanted to show the art I commissioned and give thanks to the artist and my editor. This project would have never been possible without either of them, I'm so thankful for the both of them. They want to remain anonymous, I kindly ask everyone to respect their wishes.

Now here is the art!

Spoiler

 

[SmithEK]

Hello everyone, I hope your having a wonderful day. With this post I wanted to show the art I commissioned and give thanks to the artist and my editor. This project would have never been possible without either of them, I'm so thankful for the both of them. They want to remain anonymous, I kindly ask everyone to respect their wishes.

Now here is the art!

Spoiler

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Is that the final art that will make it in the game?

 

[OreoLuma]

Is that the final art that will make it in the game?

The art is final, do you have any problems or suggestions?
We are still waiting on review, but if the doc does get in the game the art will be used.

 

[Zackflame]

No offense but it looks too cartoony

 

[SmithEK]

The art is final, do you have any problems or suggestions?
We are still waiting on review, but if the doc does get in the game the art will be used.

I can't draw for shit.. but the facial expressions to me just seem the same as the previous one.

 

[TheIrishOtaku]

I could be wrong on this but I was under the impression that the responsibility of providing artwork for the game was purely on the devs who usually commission artists like Moira to draw the characters. I don't know of any writer who's gone out of their way to get the images commissioned pre-emptively like you're planning, maybe ones have in the past and I'm just not aware of them. I'm not sure if they'll accept the art along with the google doc although its possible I suppose.

 

[Jstar]

I could be wrong on this but I was under the impression that the responsibility of providing artwork for the game was purely on the devs who usually commission artists like Moira to draw the characters. I don't know of any writer who's gone out of their way to get the images commissioned pre-emptively like you're planning, maybe ones have in the past and I'm just not aware of them. I'm not sure if they'll accept the art along with the google doc although its possible I suppose.

Generally speaking, if an npc in-game gets content in, they're gonna get art. With Moira on standby, Savin will put a request on the trello. That said, getting art costs money, and it's preferable on the non-staff side to let the heads pay for the art. But, if someone comes along and provides the art for their content, then I doubt the heads will say no to the free assets.

 

[Jstar]

Hello everyone, I hope your having a wonderful day. With this post I wanted to show the art I commissioned and give thanks to the artist and my editor. This project would have never been possible without either of them, I'm so thankful for the both of them. They want to remain anonymous, I kindly ask everyone to respect their wishes.

Now here is the art!

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I like the overall design and the gradual increase in size of the tits. It's more than what other artists would do (they'd just add a bigger and bigger circle on the base design and call it a day). The two criticisms I'd like to extend, though, is the belly shape and the belly crease. The belly crease does exist, but it's not an indentation, it's a pigmentation thing. Other than those comments, the pieces look very nice; they've got a nice art style to them.

 

[Jstar]

 

[TheIrishOtaku]

Generally speaking, if an npc in-game gets content in, they're gonna get art. With Moira on standby, Savin will put a request on the trello. That said, getting art costs money, and it's preferable on the non-staff side to let the heads pay for the art. But, if someone comes along and provides the art for their content, then I doubt the heads will say no to the free assets.

Ah that makes sense, thank you for the clarification.

 

[Gabranth]

Not a fan of pregnancy
But I am a fan of quality.

I liked it, found it sweet.
Hope it gets included.

 

[OreoLuma]

Thank you for kind words everyone!
It will probably cost more money but I'll see if they can fix the criticisms Mr. Jstar brought up. Now I see some people don't like the art, that is understandable and I respect your opinion but the artist has been very flexible and understanding. Personally I love the style of the artist and think it was money well-spent, all I ask is that you give it a second chance.

 

[OreoLuma]

Expanding on my comments above.
I would like to apologize and clarify that the images above aren't the final art, but rather unpolished art that are currently having improvements made to them. I naively thought originally they looked fine enough to be called the final, but both I and the artist have recognized the problems and are working to improve for a much more polished and truly 'final' art. What you've seen was made under unclear instructions and now those mistakes are being taken into account. Again I apologize because it was my responsibility to make sure the art had clear instructions and now it reflects poorly on the artist. I ask you give the art another chance.

 

[OreoLuma]

Hello everyone!
I've come to show the updated art, the artist has worked very hard to improve the quality. A massive thank you to them and to Mr. Jstar for helping us improve on the original (Apologizes if I was annoying). Myself and the artist are still new to making NSFW stuff so if you have any suggestions please leave them.

Spoiler: Clementine pregnancy art (Updated)

 

[Gabranth]

Looks great.

 

[Dude_with_bad_english]

Soooooo... what's up? All being well and good? Will this be accepted and added to the game? I just don't quite understand the principles of the order of adding content. Just recently we got a new NPC that was written around the same time as this addition, maybe even a little later (I could be mistaken). Hopefully they didn't save this piece of cake for next Mayternity. Hungry for lovely wool shenanigans.

 

[Ace Hangman]

Hopefully they didn't save this piece of cake for next Mayternity. Hungry for lovely wool shenanigans.

Maybe they're planning to spring it out for Christmas with Clementine. You walk in and she's knitting little wool booties and tells you she's ready.

I haven't actually read the doc myself, was trying to keep it a surprise. It sounded like they had their own editor already, but I suppose I could look it over.

 

[Savin]

Something probably went wrong with the author actually submitting this on the Google Form -- it's never been on our trello at all. I've put it up there now.

 

[Ace Hangman]

... I've hit many roadblocks with this project, with my editor essentially quitting on me after paying them a large sum of money.

I feel bad hearing about the editor situation. I haven't read the document since I like Clementine and was looking forward to experiencing some new fun and games with her. I can look it over after work tonight if you want, but it also sounds like you've had plenty of advice and I'd hate to offer more advice if you're already making good progress.

 

[OreoLuma]

I feel bad hearing about the editor situation. I haven't read the document since I like Clementine and was looking forward to experiencing some new fun and games with her. I can look it over after work tonight if you want, but it also sounds like you've had plenty of advice and I'd hate to offer more advice if you're already making good progress.

The sentiment is much appreciated, however I would like to politely decline. Right now I just want to focus on getting every scene rewritten and commissioning art. I would much rather have advice when the whole doc is overall better, because as of now. The parsering is non-existent and I still have to rewrite all of the sex scenes. Which are large chucks of the work. Apologizes, I just want to focus on thing at a time.

I was worried everyone would be upset at the bad news. However, your post and some other people have really brightened my day and overall feelings on the project. That's more then enough for now.

 

[Ace Hangman]

Right now I just want to focus on getting every scene rewritten and commissioning art.

Then I will leave it unread and wait to see the finished work when it gets accepted. You're still working on it, and the motivation to keep writing is really the most important thing. The polishing can come later.

 

[A1teros]

I do still hope if this gets in we get another art from Moira, I'm very fond of Clementine's original art.

 

[OreoLuma]

I do still hope if this gets in we get another art from Moira, I'm very fond of Clementine's original art.

Moira's art is very good, it really adds to the cute factor of Clementine.

The reason I commissioned art was because I wanted to make sure the doc had art to go with it. Some preg content doesn't have art to go with it, like with Wynne and Matiha. Sadly, not many people were fond of the art I commissioned, but it is understandable. I gave poor instructions for the commission. I've offered to recommission from the same artist, but they are quite hesitant from the negative response and difficultly of making it. If they decline, then I guess I will have to commission art from Moira. Although I don't know how much that would cost me or if they would accept. I would like to have all stages 1-4, as I don't like how most busts go from flat belly to a rather enormous belly with no progression. However, that is understandable art is rather expensive and time consuming.

 

[Jstar]

If they decline, then I guess I will have to commission art from Moira. Although I don't know how much that would cost me or if they would accept. I would like to have all stages 1-4, as I don't like how most busts go from flat belly to a rather enormous belly with no progression. However, that is understandable art is rather expensive and time consuming.

You don't have to. If the content gets into the game, Moira will draw it regardless, unless you already have art to provide Savin.

 

[Ace Hangman]

Even so, I've noticed (and really like) that artwork for characters in CoC 2 can come from different artists and the reader can click that little tab when they click the bust pictures to see the different perspectives of different artists for a character. Granted, some, like Vatia, don't have full pregnancy by each artist (and some only have one artist's design), but it still lets people view and set the style and look they like. So your artist can still have their artwork and nom de plume seen by others even though Moira will likely do one for accepted work.

 

[OreoLuma]

People greatly prefer Moira's art, at least based on the reactions I've seen around the community when different artists are used. I will still try to recommission art as I want all the stages. But if they reject the commission offer, I'll just give up on getting art.

Either way, the doc gets art.