[Accepted] Evening Everly: human, mercenary, feels some way about mods

[Aceinthehole]

LITERALLY A WHOLE MONTH LATER:

Changes are all done. Extra stories are all done. Now I'm just gonna write mountains of smut until the cows come home.

Added a tribbing scene for the ladies out there! This one and the riding scene both involve you getting cuffed. Now that it's possible to experience that no matter what you're packing in your pants, I'm going to write some scenes where you get to cuff her instead (male and female option).

After those I'm thinking missionary is next, along with options to be either rough or gentle and adjust your personality score accordingly. That's make this technically 4 more scenes in total. Fuck that's a lot.

 

[Aceinthehole]

Two new scenes! No one's replied to this thread in a while but I see people liking my posts so I assume people are still reading them!

Now if you get cuffed by Evening you get the opportunity to turn the tables on her, muahahaha. There's a female and a male genitalia option. It's not my best work but ehhhhhhhh I can edit it later.

I'm about 50% of the way through the missionary scenes too. After that I'll be done all the stuff I had planned for her initial encounter... I'm not sure if I should go back through her current stuff and try to make it hardlight-compatible or try to think of new content. I started writing a heat scene but it'd probably be exclusive to follower Evening content. Might be too soon to be writing that kind of stuff

 

[Aceinthehole]

I did it. Missionary scene is done. It has two main branches, but the entire thing is >4k words when you count them all. Jesus christ

Evening's doc is almost 46k words now, and half of it is porn. How did this happen.

With this, I've written literally every single scene I was imagining for her initial encounter, so all that's left is proofreading. If I get super sick of that... follower content stuff I guess?

50% porn... I didn't even intend for that to be the focus of this character... what have I become...

 

[Number13]

50% porn... I didn't even intend for that to be the focus of this character... what have I become...

Just the average person on this site

 

[Aceinthehole]

Evening has been accepted! Stay tuned for her crew content post because I don't know the meaning of quitting while I'm ahead!

 

[sumdude3456]

Big time agree with Malidica here, just took a gander through her doc and I gotta say she's just wonderful. Having a character with endearing and non-intrusive quirks, personal goals, and a consistent personality, all while laying groundwork to expand their content is tough to do but you got it right. Additionally, those sex scenes were top tier. That gentle missionary scene got me hoping for some semblance of a romance arc, I'm kind of a sucker for the "start out as casual friends but there's something more" kind of love. I'm probably biased because she ticks a lot of my boxes, especially my greatest fetish: clever banter. (That "Gunplay" talk might've given me abs from laughing.) She's great.

All in all, you did a fucking fantastic job. She's already up there as one of my favorite characters alongside Bianca and Syri, definitely looking forward to whatever you write next! Big ups!

 

[Aceinthehole]

Thank you for the kind words, sumdude I wrote her with "things that appeal to me" in mind, so having someone who appreciates the same things like her means a lot! I'm excited to see her finally make it into the game!

I wasn't originally intending for there to be a romance arc with her, but depending on how the quest goes... we'll seeeeeeeeeee

 

[SeriousBlueJewel]

Ace is already aware of this, but I made her wiki page in advance. This means she can have her wiki page uploaded the day she appears on a TiTS build. I currently have it and several others saved on my pc as text files.

 

[Aceinthehole]

Unfortunately I don't see myself writing a lot of butt stuff on account of me finding butts foreign and terrifying, buuuuut if someone else were to take it upon them to write such a scene and I deemed it sufficiently well-written/in character, I wouldn't mind making it canon. It's not against her character, just against my ability to write anything butt-related.

 

[SeriousBlueJewel]

Stupid question, but in her crew content will we be able to give her a gun shaped dildo?

 

[Aceinthehole]

M-maybe...

 

[Aceinthehole]

For those interesting in continuing to follow my progress fleshing out Evening's content, her follower event submission thread is now posted! Feel free to shoot questions and suggestions for her expansion at me there!