[0.7.3] Foothills encounters + Typos

[teawolf]

Ello again. In the "Fuck Him" option when first meeting Berwyn, on the second page, "collarbone" should be one word:


When meeting Zhara & her band for the first time, in the appearance page, "wields" should be "wield" ("all ... of them wield"):


On the third green tile to the east in the Foothills, "wont to do" should be "wont to be:"


Ran into Gianna, and when choosing "Leave," I think there's an extra space between "y'self" and "travelers:"


On the purple tile north of the Foothills waystone, the second sentence is hard to follow. "This spot" is repeated twice in this sentence, I would cut the second "on this spot," and "for one" after "elevation:"


When meeting the manticore girl, I'm not entirely sure what "tent" means here... her dick? Is it supposed to be "tent pole?" Or maybe "tent in her clothes"--? Tent itself is just something made of cloth, so I'm not entirely sure if it's her cock:


In the "Fuck Vag" option, the "you" in the first sentence should be uncapitalized:


LOL--if the PC has a small cock, there should be a comma before "assuming," in the fourth paragraph:

 

[teawolf]

Continuing the manticore girl encounter, there should be a comma after "squeezing:"


There should be a comma after "suns" in this sentence, and after "Regardless" in the second image:



When encountering the mercenaries, the hyphen after "road" should be an em-dash with spaces on other side, in keeping with the rest of the scene (see second screenshot):



On the tower tile, there's a comma missing after "though:"


On the first tile of the wizard tower in Ugly Duckling, "it's" should be "its," and the "'s" after "arm" should be cut, or a comma added after "cracked:"


In camp, when Brint is wearing [x], his checking his weapons should be adjusted to be singular:

 

[teawolf]

Last ones for today--! When entering the Ways Between for the first time, if Brint is a companion, there is a comma missing after [pc.name]:


"Backyard" should be one word:

 

[zagzig]

Should be sorted, cheers.