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I finished the Alissa doc. I corrected any typos I saw and noted any inconsistencies or suggestions. Most of them are just that; one person's opinion. Others may agree or disagree. I hope some of it was helpful.

Like HugLife says, sometimes writers don't always take every parser into consideration. They have their own Champ, and they have a vision of the scene they are writing, and it's hard to write out your vision, while having quantum-shifting bodyparts. When I edit and read through, there's many...

I know Nihara, the Tirran priestess notably changes in physical appearance based on Champ's corrupted interaction, that I don't think it affects her personality or anything too much, but the appearance definitely changes.

Most of the docs I read just use a [pc.hasKnot] parser, which will trigger such things regardless of the cock you have. I obviously can't speak to all scenes currently in the game (my Champ has one, with a designer demon-cock and another with a human cock , (or at least, human-looking) as far as...

Wow. What a lot of work. I am barely up to the punishment section. So much effort and motivation. Lots of fun options to pursue. I will hold off on most comments until I finish, but I did want to mention some things I hope are done to set the scene or answer some questions some readers might...

Of course not... Because that would be wrong. But... I am sure we could create a smuggler in game... who gets caught by the Wayfort guards while trying to avoid tolls and taxes... ... and you can 'pump' them for information on how it works... Purely as a preventative method, of course. To help...

Frosted Flakes commercials are getting out of hand.

It's possible after some scenes she needs about an hour to recover. Usually the missionary or breeding ones, but I can't be sure. If that's the case, she's there in the tent, but not available for fun until she rests a bit.

Nope, Hirrud shows up and defeats Kasyrra just before you arrive. Total heel/face turn. Let's her live... she totally respects him for it. Saves the whole goddamn world... He lets you keep his cloak. Not even mad about it, even.

Those wicked devs... master baiters, one and all.

Back to play with Arona on the team for this run. Ylvid > Combat (Victory) > Arona Doubleteam 52. This is probably meant to be 'bush', since it would be quite a feat of contortion for Arona to get her bust in that position while being deep-throated (though they are pretty big while she's...

Sea Wyrm > The Stalactite > Leananstone 49. Should be 'sent' instead of 'send'. Sea Wyrm > The Stalactite > Throw Something 50. Should be 'sent' instead of 'send'. Sea Wyrm > The Stalactite > Livrea? > Livrea's Magic 51. This should probably be 'lightning' instead of 'lighting'.

Kobolds > Combat (Victory) > Roleplay King > Largest Male (cont.) 40. Should be 'exhausted' instead of 'exhausting'. 41. Should be 'they'll' instead of 'they're'. Kobolds > Combat (Victory) > Roleplay King > Rogue Female 42. Should probably be 'personnel' instead of 'personal'...

Kobolds > Combat (Loss) cont. 30. Should be a space at the start of this sentence, likely a parser error. 31. 'Orc' should be capitalized since it's the start of a sentence. 32. This part doesn't make sense, I know it's supposed to be the area after the kobold fight, but them being...

Kobold > Combat (Loss) cont. 20. 'Orcs' should be capitalized, since it's the start of a sentence. I assume there's a [pc.race] type parser at play here. 21. 'effects' instead of 'affects'. 22. This doesn't make sense. At the end of the last scene, you were knocked to your knees. Then here...

Fight Her > Combat (Victory) 10. Should be 'a fight' instead of 'I fight'. Fight Her > Combat (Victory) > Leave 11. Not really a typo, but this scene here shows up and doesn't seem to fit with you sending Ylvid off (I assume it's the merge scene after a Victory-Fuckin', which seems to be...

The message for joining the Liv dungeon. Granted, this probably isn't super important since most people shouldn't see it 1. Should be 'King's Gate'. Encounter with Ylvid 2. Should be 'just a cape' 3. Should be 'muscle's' or 'muscle is' instead of 'muscles's' 4. Should be 'kind of'...

If you want an easy win, you could give Lieutenant Jen an Eye entry and note she has green eye(s).

Oh my God! I just found Oma, and my first wish was for her freedom and this is what I see... The next couple paragraphs are Oma begging you to make your wishes... You know what I would expect after seeing that choice of 'perfect' wording. Something along the lines of: I'm just sayin'... I...

Unfortunately, I think Kohaku is allergic to cats. She suffers through for the sake of the Champ, if a catfolk... but that's just out of politeness.