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Obviously, this is the place for gripes. I am not downplaying your feelings. In response to this part, I have to disagree. Naturally, you're entitled to feel or have your own perspective on this, and I am just sharing my observations. I have never once thought Kinu treated the Champ as a random...

I wouldn't expect them to have an image for a whole bunch of different sizes. I think the implication in most meetings is that when she's not with you, she's out in the woods taking dick from leothrans, frost elves, or others passing by an inch at a time, so even if you take some from her, she's...

Yep, but we can't help Lusamine get fertile (yet). Some magical herb, some magical artifact, dealing with Evergreen, giving her money so she can do it herself (or she'd just have to use her new womb to have her baby, though I can understand her not wanted to give up her first baby, ergo earning...

But... my Champ is waaaay smarter in-character than my real-life avatar. Can't we just do an Intelligence check, so I can drink some booze in a bar and raise that stat temporarily before the scene?! What kind of game is this that you expect us to read?! I just look at the pictures and keep...

I think the idea of the kitsune being more integrated is a fine idea. I think that's actually something that is being done with the Champ's presence (or not, depending on if they choose to). You free their princess, you show that not all foreigners are out to kill them, and you learn that not...

Finished reading through the Gao-Ju document. Seems solid as a foundation and concept. Covers a lot of bases for the scene so far (being the first and second meeting). Obviously guys aren't my thing, but I noted any typos, concerns, and suggestions or opinions. If it gets approved for expansion...

Sure, maybe not your Champ, but mine's like a chocolate penis that ejaculates money. Demons are obsessive and my cock is the only thing that brings him to climax. He's like, "Yummy!" and when he gets that surge of lethicite power when it shoots down his throat, he's like, "I'm gonna spend all...

I think you misunderstood. I meant that, the Champ cums out their soul to their newly-created demon. So they have to be Corrupt to corrupt him, but if they aren't careful, when they get to the last treatment, they pleasure makes the Champ lose their soul and it's a bad end, so the player has to...

I finished reading up on Tykis' Corrupt Path. Lots of good writing there. If I had to make notes, I'd say that 'elf', 'soft' and 'slut' were used a lot. Obviously he's an elf, but it was used a lot and by itself with no adjectives to spice it up. I also noted that you gave very little love or...

I always forget what the order is, 'hyper', 'mega', 'ultra', 'giga'... It's been too long since I've played Killer Instinct.

Shout out to this game's editor(s)! Mad props to those spellcheckers! There's so much text and options and variants to go through. Those guys (gals, and other) are amazing. (>.>) (<.<) Whoever they are.

Don't take this as criticism. This is the place for stating what you'd like. I am not faulting you, only taking the opportunity to comment on my own thoughts, not to argue or downplay yours. I like Lyric (girl Lyric). I think the personality she has is spot on and very suited to her. I...

True, but this isn't so much a bug as an oversight. Even with companions there should always be a Back option or a companion check on option to get here (Back would probably be preferable, since it will also let the reader see what companions have content and not have to keep running to the...

Recruitment? You mean like, invite her into the Wayfort? Would she live in the tower where Aileh is? Maybe if you turned away the dragon general and it was vacant? Making the Champ choose one or the other?

Dom Sex > Subdue Caera 39. Should be 'respite' instead of 'reprise' (I think this is also in the Cock Removal sex scene, this might be the same scene with parsers for all I know). 40. Should be a disguise parser here to change this adjective while she's in disguise (this is likely in the...

cont. 30. Should be 'you are'. 31. There should be a disguise adjective here instead of 'blue'. 32. Should be 'look at how' or 'watch' instead of 'look how'. 33. Should be a disguise adjective here instead of 'red' for when she's not red. 34. Should be a disguise adjective here (or...

Dom Sex > Fuck Sandre 20. Should be 'back of the knee' 21. This is correct in that Sandre is the red demon of the pair, but in this scene she is in her human disguise. I think there should be a parser that checks if she's in disguise and substitutes a different adjective; 'disguised'...

cont. 11. Is this just written as ivory, or is it a [pc.cumColor] parser. I am certain this Champ ejaculates amber honey. Talk > Cock Removal > subdue Sandre > Do your best Before anything else, I don't see in this scene where Sandre actually cums. Since this is a challenge to see who cums...

Yeah, yeah. I misspelled 'Sandre' in the title. I can't change it now and I don't want to repost this. Talk > Cock Removal > Lose Pathetically First, is it intended for you to cum your soul out at any level of corruption. I literally had 1 Corruption. Anyway: 1. Remove the extra space. 2...

Obviously not an official answer, but it seems unlikely. She marries off her daughters, I don't think she, herself, is inclined to marry.