Maybe Oma or Keros could help with that.
Keros' Bounceback Boots
Negates Stunned and Prone but opponent gets extra attacks.
In use:
You are (knocked prone/stunned)!
No, wait! Your boots set firmly into the ground and instead of being sent reeling you spring back upright[silly| like some...
That wasn't a joke. It wasn't a trick, or a prank. It was an equitable exchange. It is one of his founding precepts. He had to create a new body for Kiyoko, Kinu, and all the kids, and not only that, go beyond and gave them a home and a way to live and survive themselves. That isn't something...
That is possible. Yeah, that was definitely the cost for the Champ, not punishment or a joke on Koyoko or her children. He had to create whole new physical bodies for her and Kinu (and all the other chidlren). He gives people want they want, but Kiyoko has never wanted a penis or acted like a...
I don't think Keros had anything to do with her being trapped in the amulet. He may have made the amulet, he may have crafted the Astral Plane it was linked to, but he had nothing to do with her body getting destroyed as she was fleeing into it.
I don't know if I agree. He certainly might if she expressed an interest in having a cock, as opposed to having cock inside her, but I don't think he'd do it just to fuck with her. I think he really cares about her and thinks she's been through enough, and I really don't think she'd want...
I read through it. No typos, just a few punctuation notes, mostly commas. The dialogue doesn't have to be expressly italicized, since I believe it gets done automatically. Other than that, just do a search for common words like 'cock' or 'pucker' and make sure you switch them up so they aren't...
I read through it. I don't think I found a single typo. Just some punctuation stuff, mostly commas. Very solid sex scene. I am not into the peens myself, but it was good.
If you wanted more work, I would say there could have been a little more body action from her besides tail and snake-wang...
I think there's a reason they call it 'wasp waisted'. It wouldn't be healthy on a human, but presumably a hornet body is more conducive, especially since they aren't really made for pregnancy. Embrace Nyze's unique physiology and race and love him for the subby little anal prince he is.
"Hey Jae'lyn. Take that buttplug out and put this ring between your cheeks until I tell you to remove it."
Switch roles and give one to Azyrran, her mother, or Drider Queen and they use it on their ovipositor to just keep sliding eggs inside you and in a constant state of eggnancy...
I am just imagining all the clever/horrifying names players will come up with that turn otherwise innocent sentences on their heads
(Big black staff/ massive iron war balls/ rusty trombone)
'she knocks your [pc.weapon] out of your hand and knocks you to the ground. You reach for [it/them] but...
I don't think there's any more that needs to be written (but that's always a possibility).
To me: It reads like she's saying she's not interested in sharing all her preferences or talking about what she looks for 'in a lover'.
At least, Right now . Maybe later there'll be an expansion where she...
Could add in a Relatives line for Drifa while you wait. Her Mother (Lupine), Father (Human, I would think, since she's Half-Lupine), and her sister (Elise, Half-Lupine). I don't know her parents' names, if those are even mentioned.
I am not sure about a specific Belharan Empire entry, but if you mean Arms & Tactics, Armies & Warriors, or Culture of War that would probably be talking with Lt. Jen or Annika in Lumia's Palace of Light.
It's the biggest it can possibly be (without Well-hung), and then one or two inches shorter than that, because...
What? Am I trying to prove somethin'? No.... I only did it so I can spellcheck those parser ranges in all the sex scenes...
Not going into her secrets, others can.
She's objectively evil, but only based on the observer's perception. She's as 'evil' as any other person interacting in the world and game of Savarra, where things would be 'bad' or 'wrong' or 'problematic' in our own world and morals. Does she do 'bad'...