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See, I on the other hand (which means this only applies to me), have never gotten that impression. Nothing she said ever led me to think she didn't like Champ or even love Champ. I just never got that. If she did say something mean or bad, I can't really give it much weight to all the other...

"This really isn't necessary, Father," Kinu says. "I am well aware of the Wayfort. I sometimes meet passing traders and some of your guardsman to barter for feeding. In disguise, of course." "No," you tell her. "I just want you to see that there's more to your barbaric, old father than a...

Finished reading through your Sayumi Ishida doc. She feels believable. She talks a little differently, but then there's a Miko and Mai who talk like... I don't even know. I know they're already submitted, but I left some notes. I hope they help. Not sure that reviewers like looking at docs while...

It's all fun and games until Barania sends up a patrol of Fleeced Anal Police and you're surrounded by F.A.P.pers.

Read through it. Seems pretty polished to me. I didn't spot many typos or grammar errors or anything. I can't condone such depraved debauchery to my sweet, darling of a Baranian... but it looks good.

Of course what you were is important. If you grew up as an orc, you will have orcish feelings inside and things an orc would know or have in perspective. If you were born an orc... you probably get dizzy at the thought of a massive longboat, whether you look like a demon now or not. You probably...

Is that how you interpreted it? I viewed it more as a "Hey buddy, you alright? It's okay, let's get you up and get you another tray and some fries."

I assume it's because she's a phoenix, and likes fire, and that's about as close to home as she can be while she gets used to her new body (and the hellhound was there for playing with until her recent move to the Wayfort). Plus, as a flying character, her 'showing up' in the Frost Hound or...

Very evocative. I feel sorry for the innocent girl but... I am also a deviant pervert (allegedly). I probably would have added in some [dcb] or [pc.isDK] and had her being more aggressive, calling them pervert or deviant. Maybe add in a little more about how tight she is as the fist went in.

Deep voice: "Hey, I'm... uhh 'Quirt'. 'Quirt Manly'. Your friend Cait said there was somethin' that a totally real, totally manly man like me could help with?"

Yes, we're not sure what the 3rd best scene is.

Read through the maid scene. Corrected any typos I saw. The only thing that read strangely to me that I recall was the heavy leaning into Dragon Champ or lord/lady. The scenes were good, it's just that those pop up. A lot. Read Malikir, he's not for me, but I am sure some people here like a...

I am not 100% sure, and others feel free to correct (or an easier way). But try clicking that catgirl image at the top, and going to that site and there might be a Patreon or SubscribeStar link. If it's not on a banner on the side, might have to scroll down a bit.

Luma asked me to share my thoughts. This is not my forum hub. My thoughts are only my own, and normally I am not here to debate in someone else's story. Also it isn't my place to have her submitted or not. I wrote some scenes to help flesh her out at Luma's request so they could focus on writing...

The only issue I would have (and that means it's just my opinion), not that it's wrong or anything, and this is the place to share what you want... is that it just feels out of character. While it may not be a big secret for her and the Champ (and anyone Champ invites in, ie. Arona, Etheryn...

Don't believe the misdirection. Her full name is 'Armitia Moongiven', which, when decoded spells out, 'Team Minion Virago'. A virago is a domineering woman. And team minion is indisputably a reference to Tollus' cult, minions of Kasyrra. Need more? It also spells out, 'Magenta Imino Voir'...

Charline Banetalon is a mature harpy that can be found roaming the Windy Peaks.

Like Nino said, you start your thread off on a whole tangent. If your post is basically: 'What are some good Black Mage powers to acquire?' then just say that. If your post is basically: 'I looked at the wiki, but I don't trust it about Black Mage Powers, tell me the good ones,' then say that...

The Powers tab has a filter option already. It has a search bar if you know at least part of the the name. You can click the B.Mage (or W.Mage, etc.) buttons to have those appear only, you can set the level shown. Only for the one rare off class or Other skill it really shouldn't be that hard. I...

Viol is svelte, slender, tight abs goo-cat.