Read through the maid scene. Corrected any typos I saw. The only thing that read strangely to me that I recall was the heavy leaning into Dragon Champ or lord/lady. The scenes were good, it's just that those pop up. A lot.
Read Malikir, he's not for me, but I am sure some people here like a elven plaything. Of course, currently as written, he's hetero from what I see, so some kara birds or crabs might come at you with knives. It's understandable if you're keeping it tight and simple for a first or early character (I know what some parsers can do to length and complexity). I actually don't think it would be too hard to make it work through [vag] and [vagOrAss] placement, but if it gets positively reviewed, that's probably an easy Quality of Life add-in, assuming you get more response from others.
Looking forward to finding out just who the wildling one is when I have more time.
