Majima's Cabaret Grand

[AramenMajima]

Customer is King, which means any feedback is welcomed

Sayumi Ishida, taskmaster of the wildlings [Submitted]
Sayumi Quest [Submitted]
Malikir Ashilan, the sound mage [Submitted]
Wayfort maids fuck scenes [Submitted]
Fortuna Zorba, the Seagull Harpy [Released]

 

[Dreamer44]

They seem like interesting docs. Good luck getting them approved

 

[Ace Hangman]

Read through the maid scene. Corrected any typos I saw. The only thing that read strangely to me that I recall was the heavy leaning into Dragon Champ or lord/lady. The scenes were good, it's just that those pop up. A lot.

Read Malikir, he's not for me, but I am sure some people here like a elven plaything. Of course, currently as written, he's hetero from what I see, so some kara birds or crabs might come at you with knives. It's understandable if you're keeping it tight and simple for a first or early character (I know what some parsers can do to length and complexity). I actually don't think it would be too hard to make it work through [vag] and [vagOrAss] placement, but if it gets positively reviewed, that's probably an easy Quality of Life add-in, assuming you get more response from others.

Looking forward to finding out just who the wildling one is when I have more time.

 

[Ace Hangman]

Finished reading through your Sayumi Ishida doc. She feels believable. She talks a little differently, but then there's a Miko and Mai who talk like... I don't even know. I know they're already submitted, but I left some notes. I hope they help. Not sure that reviewers like looking at docs while other people are leaving comments, so... maybe see if any ideas help or anything. and then clear them. Not like anyone else is gonna agree. I can't say I like all the semicolon and colon use... but do I think anyone else cares? Probably not unless the reviewer does.

 

[AramenMajima]

Spoiler

I am still alive, and I come with good news!

Fortuna, the seagull harpy, has arrived in the game and she's ready to defeat you in battle for all of your riches
Or, if you're strong enough, it's going to be you who shall plunder her riches