Perhaps change "chance" to "change, and a bit of a suggestion, but maybe also remove the highlighted comma, as imo that will help the sentence flow better.
Maybe change "much" to "many" or "numerous" or something similar, whatever works best. Also, the end of the sentence, imo, feels... idk it feels like there should be more there, like its been cut off. idk, do what you deem fit, sorry.
this next one is a bit more of a nitpick, so apologies if im being rude by stating it here, but the interation menu for geoff is a bit confusing, since when you first go to the shop all you see is the buy/sell options, so you could pretty easily just assume theres nothing further to interact...
Ripped this from the wiki so idk if this is totally accurate anymore, but several grammatical errors in the fake cooties entry in the codex entry for cooties. Sorry that i havent properly checked the in game status, but you guys really made it difficult to contract this stuff, lol.
For some reason when the feruze loss scene plays, it also seems to have gotten mushed in with an encounter scene from one of the common enemies. Pic for proof
And cocksocks/cockrings too. There's like only 3 or 4 in game ATM. I mean there's literally a flavor text thing on dhaal of someone selling them.
I need my fornucative fashion dammit!