[Work in progress] Chieftain of the Milodan amazon, extension

[Dusty77]

Hi everyone, I need to explain what happened recently.

The thread disappeared due to a mistake on my part. I wanted to update the first message in the thread so that newcomers wouldn't feel lost.

However, in doing so, I indirectly caused the thread to disappear because it had to be re-approved by a moderator.

I didn't realize this would happen, and I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience.

For future updates, I will simply post a message in the thread as usual.

Once again, I am truly sorry for all the trouble.

 

[Maytrus]

Greetings! Are you still working on this? If so, I would like to help. I love the Amazons - they're my favorite part of the game - and I'd like to help expand that content.

 

[Dusty77]

Greeting everyone, and happy new year.

I have many thing to tell you.

First of all, I apologize for the fact that there has been no update for almost two months. Regarding this point, it's not that I don't write, it's just that I already write in a separate Word file that is not public. Once the text has been edited and revised, it is added to the public Word file that you all have access to. But, don't worry, I am still on it. However, I'm not giving a date in the future to avoid disappointing you if I don't manage to finish before the deadline.

Beause it's New Year's, I've decided to be original and let Fafney and Sheila tell you about my misadventure.

Enjoy this mini scene:


Fafney: "Hey, sluts! My sister and I have some stuff to tell you!"


Sheila: "Oh, really? And what are you going to tell us, granny?"


Fafney: "Shut up, you! Uh... where was I?"


Sheila: "You know memory loss is one of the first signs of senility?"


Fafney: "I said shut up! If you keep going, I’ll... Stop looking at me like that, you’re creeping me out!"


Sheila: "Oh... and I who wanted to encourage you in my own way, you really disappoint me, sis."


Fafney: "Grrr... Go fuck some other meat hole you're obsessed with and leave me the hell alone…! Please..."


Sheila: "He’s already received more love than he can handle… I prefer staying with you than drowning him even more. You can go on, I won’t interrupt you anymore."


Fafney: "Uh… thanks? Anyway, my bitches, like I was saying, I have some announcements to make, and they concern us, as well as our chieftain! The first is that the bastard responsible for writing her great mythic saga has had some problems recently."


Sheila: "Oh! What are they?"


Fafney: "He says he’s found something called 'a job,' and because of that, the time he can dedicate to recounting her glory has become more complicated. Plus, he ‘thought’ some of his writings weren’t up to the glory of our goddess and that he had to redo them. That’s the pathetic excuse he gave us for not finishing the holy writings before the renewal of the celestial cycle."


Sheila: "Isn’t there any good news, then? For example, has he been punished?"


Fafney: "Sadly, no, dear sister. Punishing him would only make him fall further behind, according to our chieftain. However, he’s self-flagellated for his mistakes and decided to write an unpublished chapter about our goddess’s history. She’s even chained him to her throne to finish his great piece of art as quickly as possible, but no one knows when he’ll complete it."


Sheila: "Don’t you think that with all the... aura our goddess exudes, this might have the opposite effect?"


Fafney: "I don’t know, and I don’t care, as long as I’m not the one who has to go through it."


Sheila: "I recognize you well, my sister. By the way, I hear our people at the bottom of the pyramid starting the celebration for the new celestial cycle that’s coming."


Fafney: "What a shame we don’t have a drum to celebrate its arrival here. Get ready, sis. 3… 2… 1… The new celestial cycle as arr- YAAAAH!"


Sheila: "Sorry, I wanted to play the drum for you so badly, but the only thing available was your big ass."


Fafney: "You’re completely… crazy! I hate you, do you hear me... I... hate... you!"


Sheila: "It saddens me that you say that… but I understand the cry for help you’re throwing at me between your terrible words. I didn’t give you enough love... I’ll shall correct that mistake immediately!"


Fafney: "What? No, stop! My ass is already red enough as it is! Don’t come any closer! Aaah!"

As mentioned in this scene, I was really busy with my professional work during the last month, but I'm still working hard and have written an extra scene to make up for it, which wasn't planned... Do you like to pet a giant 12 foot cat? XD

Greetings! Are you still working on this? If so, I would like to help. I love the Amazons - they're my favorite part of the game - and I'd like to help expand that content.

Yes i'm still on it ^^. Any help is welcome. If you want to tell me what you want to do or suggest something, you can send me a private message.

 

[Dusty77]

UPDATE

"Greetings, mortal! Your goddess bestows upon you the rare honor of her voice in these troubled times. It is only fitting that you be reminded — her devotion to her duty knows no bounds… and that you may bear witness to her boundless generosity, and find comfort in the fate that awaits you.

Rejoice! For my legend continues to rise! The pitiful yet persistent being tasked with chronicling it has ceaselessly improved, allowing each of you, at last, to learn of my singular exploits. Yet, as joy walks hand in hand with misfortune, my wretched scribe was not granted the favor of the god of time. Thus, he failed to write the more common actions of my deeds. The punishment for such negligence was… exemplary! Still, unwilling to tolerate any longer that the legend of my sexual prowess remain unwritten in stone, I have shown mercy — commanding him, without delay, to begin inscribing these grand moments of my being.

Another miracle has come to pass through my presence. A great outsider artist was captured, and after being graced with the generosity of my essence, he chose to devote the remainder of his existence to me — carving my divine form into stone. At the time of speaking, his complete opus remains incomplete. Yet I grant you this fragment, that you may revere a portion of my being… before it is revealed to you in its entirety.

Art by Maytrus​

Your goddess has now ceased to speak. But never forget — she shall remain with you for all eternity."

For those who didn’t understand a megalomaniacal, hubris-filled declaration from an overmuscular milodan futanari, here’s a brief summary:

• All the unique scenes have been completed, but the so-called “general” scenes that repeat are still missing.
• The document has been updated to the latest version. A few elements are still missing, but they’re purely aesthetic or grammatical. If all goes well, they’ll be added in the next update.
• I’ll be moving straight into writing the sex scenes rather than tackling the general scenes first, since this has been dragging on for a while.
• Lastly, my sincere and heartfelt congratulations to Maytrus, who created this preview image for the expansion and is currently working on the Chieftain’s busts. I highly encourage you to contact him if you’re interested abour his work — he does an incredible great job at the Trials in Tainted Space style.

That’s all for now — have a nice day. ^^

 

[Maytrus]

Yes, indeed - featuring the ever-popular Mitzi!

The TiTs artstyle more or less inspired me to start learning to draw in the first place. The collected works of JayEcho, Adjatha, Cheshire, Shou, and so many others combines together to form a colorful, comic-book style I've really enjoyed learning.

Took me nearly six years before I felt like I could actually do something presentable, but here I am, I guess!

I look forward to showing off the complete portfolio. Dusty has SO many ideas...

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

Yes, indeed - featuring the ever-popular Mitzi!

The TiTs artstyle more or less inspired me to start learning to draw in the first place. The collected works of JayEcho, Adjatha, Cheshire, Shou, and so many others combines together to form a colorful, comic-book style I've really enjoyed learning.

Took me nearly six years before I felt like I could actually do something presentable, but here I am, I guess!

I look forward to showing off the complete portfolio. Dusty has SO many ideas...

Do you have any accounts I can keep tabs on or follow? Twitter, bluesky, furaffinity, e621, etc?

 

[Maytrus]

Do you have any accounts I can keep tabs on or follow? Twitter, bluesky, furaffinity, e621, etc?

Thank you for reminding me. You can find me on FurAffinity and bluesky at the moment. Still working on getting my discord account in a functional state.

Also still internally debating whether or not to register for Twitter, given the site's content rules towards art...

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

Thank you for reminding me. You can find me on FurAffinity and bluesky at the moment. Still working on getting my discord account in a functional state.

Also still internally debating whether or not to register for Twitter, given the site's content rules towards art...

Thank you very much! Can't wait to see what else you cook up! Keep up the great work!

 

[Dusty77]

Hi everyone, just a quick update.

I'm still working on the first sex scene, but I've put it on hold to rewrite a good portion of the dialogue for the first encounter with the chieftain, since I thought the previous version was a bit clunky.

Normally, I would have waited until I’d completely finished my contribution to tackle this issue, but I was inspired and decided to break that rule.

For those who are a little curious but don’t want to go check it out right away, here’s an excerpt, specifically about the discovery of the chieftain.

The milodan bruisers were already terrifyingly strong foes, but this one is on another level entirely. She’s bigger… much bigger than any amazon you’ve ever seen, probably around twelve feet tall. Hard to tell for sure with her seated across the chamber, but despite the distance, she looks like a freaking giant! The strength she radiates is overwhelming, almost absurd. Every muscle in her body is massive and thick, to the point that no creature on Uveto could hope to stand against her… not even the most heavily modded thraggen in the galaxy. Hell… she looks built to wrestle a hovertank for fun.

Of course, she wears no clothes at all, aside from a few savicite accessories. Some of her shaggy fur grows thicker around her neck and hips, tinted purple and enhancing her physique like a natural dress. Each hand is crowned with massive claws as long as daggers, their sickle-like curves glinting menacingly, seeming ready to take a neck in a single stroke. Her colossal breasts bounce with every breath, so heavy they look capable of knocking someone unconscious through that motion alone. {If Steele has met Bizzie: By the way... she’d make a certain hopelessly flat kaithrit you know insanely jealous.} Her hips are huge, broad, and brutally strong — one strike could break your own like a battering ram. That same threat extends to her legs, built to crush rather than walk.

Between them stands the masterpiece of that physical perfection: a gigantic feline cock, ridged with rough nubs and glittering savicite piercings along its entire length. It rises fully erect like a sacred relic devoted to fertility and domination, so long and thick that an average-sized person could nearly recline across it. A thick ring of purple fur encircles the base like a mane, with strands spreading toward her belly button and flaring outward along her hips, merging seamlessly with the thick fur growth already covering them. Beneath that freaking ‘bitch breaker’ sway two immense balls, their absurd size hanging close to the stone floor, swollen as though they held an ocean of seed. At this point, it’s fair to wonder whether she is closer to a kui tan than a Milodan.

Only the face of the being blessed with such a godlike body remains unknown. It lingers within the shadows, broken only by the many emerald glows of what should be savicite ornaments. Only two thick violet braids are clearly visible, falling over her shoulders on either side of her face, each adorned with its own shining green ring. Behind her, a far larger braid emerges from her back, forming what appears to be a long ponytail reaching her buttocks, its tip bound by a heavy savicite ring shaped like an offset crescent.

Yeah Dean really doesn't feel like the best word to use
It's use in religion is definitely odd and seldom used
At least from the viewpoint of the average practitioner or acolyte
I would bet that most people only know it for the school setting

Regarding this point, it will be modified in a future update: the 'dean' has been renamed the 'matriarch'

Just a quick note: I used to have my version of Steele — which Maytrus drew for me — as my profile picture.
I want to thank him again for drawing it for me. ^^

Enough chit-chat, I gotta get back to writing some smut stuff. XD

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

Oh I can't wait for this! We've been needing some more muscle mommies for a while!

Also, holy hot damn, @Maytrus you need to start taking commissions because that art is incredible! Great work man!

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

Just a quick note: I used to have my version of Steele — which Maytrus drew for me — as my profile picture.
I want to thank him again for drawing it for me. ^^

Sorry if this is rude to suggest, but maybe after your done with this project, you could add your Steele to the game as an NPC? We could always use more dragon babes!

 

[Dusty77]

Sorry if this is rude to suggest, but maybe after your done with this project, you could add your Steele to the game as an NPC? We could always use more dragon babes!

It's not up to me, but to the developers of the game.

Otherwise, yeah... we always need more dragons, babe. X3

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

It's not up to me, but to the developers of the game.

Oh yeah, that's right, cuz of the frostwyrm stuff and... hmm...

Well, send a dm to them and roll the dice! Who knows, they may agree with you!

 

[Azrael1]

I was wondering out of all the npc's from this milodan village, do you think any of them would be able to be recruited to the crew and if so who do you think you would pick out of them?

If not then sorry for the bother.

P.S. If I have asked something like this before, then apologies my short term memory is terrible.

 

[Dusty77]

I was wondering out of all the npc's from this milodan village, do you think any of them would be able to be recruited to the crew and if so who do you think you would pick out of them?

If not then sorry for the bother.

P.S. If I have asked something like this before, then apologies my short term memory is terrible.

Well... would you like to travel through space with a goddess? XD

However, after bandaging her head — since she kept bumping it on the doorframe because of her height. X3

Again, it's entirely up to the developer to decide whether to accept this or not... but I personally hope he'll agree.

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

Well... would you like to travel through space with a goddess? XD

Who wouldn't?

 

[Azrael1]

Well... would you like to travel through space with a goddess? XD

However, after bandaging her head — since she kept bumping it on the doorframe because of her height. X3

Again, it's entirely up to the developer to decide whether to accept this or not... but I personally hope he'll agree

Honestly it would be cool if any of the npcs from the milodan amazon village could be recruited, as in the past I asked Savin about the Milodan priestess being able to join the crew. Sadly they weren't interested which is fair enough.

Though I have asked if it would be possible to make a recruitable Behemoth or being able to recruit The Twins from the Kiro Rescue Quest in the past.

 

[Dusty77]

UPDATE!

Hello everyone.

I’m sorry for how long this took, but writing the first sex scene ended up taking quite a while because of all the available variations. That said, aside from maybe one other scene, I think the rest should be faster to write.

And here we go with the first consensual sex scene with your double-saber-thoothed goddess… well, the first one with consent, anyway. X)

Even if you’re the one in control this time, the fact remains that you finally get officially crowned as queen on a 50-plus-inch cock. XD

The public document has already been updated, but if you don’t feel like scrolling through the whole contribution to find it, I’m also linking a second Word document where all future sex scenes with the Chieftain will be compiled.

Chieftain sex scene

Ride her - No taur variant First part You lift your head over your shoulder, casting an uncertain glance at the thing wriggling behind your back — without being able to completely see it. The chieftain bitch breaker throbs oppressively against your buttocks, each pulse traveling up through your b...

docs.google.com

For now, only the no-taur version is available, but the next one should be posted soon, so stay tuned. Also… the scene ended up getting “a little” more complex than what I originally outlined in the sex-scene plan document. X3

Feel free to leave comments and let me know if you think anything is missing.

Oh! And while we’re back on the subject of our dear Chieftain, I’m also opening a small bonus section: what does your goddess think of your various crewmates, starting with our puppy girl, Anno :

"Hmm? Why do you ask me that? Although… I suppose you were wise to seek my divine judgment, my mate. I must admit, my divine senses are always… disturbed in her presence. Are you certain she is not a sort of charismatic demon? She always makes me feel as if she is plotting something, or concealing some terrible secret... She could be a god hunter, who await to lower my guard ! That why my instinct keep telling me to watch her closely, even near to me. Yes... right under my hand which never stops to pet the head of that adorable little face of hers. Again, again and again... Wait ! By me, what did I just say?"