WARNING: The NPC is non-sexable NPC intended for some world building sake and training the PC. If you don't find this suiting your interest, please move along and don't flame.
I want to submit something to TiTs, but I wanted to start small so I went with non-sexable NPC. I settle for a Myr, one of my favorite race, and the result is Yester. To make sure she isn't dull since I know you all here for sex and/or RPG, I decide to turn her into a trainer NPC so Steele can get something out of her. Alright, rambling long enough, here she is:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MudkEHfaBZEcyKzxUYxlmDSMtArKAHVvF26x-cpMq4Q/edit?usp=sharing
I don't feel like my writing style is...flavorful enough for something like TiTs so please give me feedback on this and other points I ask in the Doc. I also have to ask, can I write scenes for other characters when you ask them about Yester?
Completed:
Appearance
First encounter
Talking branches
"Flirt"
To be implemented:
Stats (not sure this is necessary since you can't have sex with her)
Flag (not sure what this is, but I see other authors using this. Please tell me what this is.)
Training
Events
Other than that nothing much. Please give me your creative criticism and help me find errors, including what could make this disqualify for submitting.
I want to submit something to TiTs, but I wanted to start small so I went with non-sexable NPC. I settle for a Myr, one of my favorite race, and the result is Yester. To make sure she isn't dull since I know you all here for sex and/or RPG, I decide to turn her into a trainer NPC so Steele can get something out of her. Alright, rambling long enough, here she is:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MudkEHfaBZEcyKzxUYxlmDSMtArKAHVvF26x-cpMq4Q/edit?usp=sharing
I don't feel like my writing style is...flavorful enough for something like TiTs so please give me feedback on this and other points I ask in the Doc. I also have to ask, can I write scenes for other characters when you ask them about Yester?
Completed:
Appearance
First encounter
Talking branches
"Flirt"
To be implemented:
Stats (not sure this is necessary since you can't have sex with her)
Flag (not sure what this is, but I see other authors using this. Please tell me what this is.)
Training
Events
Other than that nothing much. Please give me your creative criticism and help me find errors, including what could make this disqualify for submitting.