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[WIP] Wanderlusts, a lust-based random encounter for Uveto
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It's alright!
What a pleasant, fuzzy feeling it is when people on the internet agree on something in a constructive manner.
It's alright!
What a pleasant, fuzzy feeling it is when people on the internet agree on something in a constructive manner.
Just be careful not to get used to it...
Didn't know that was actually a Colenso theory, as I usually just sell junk to him. You make a very good point, and I like your solution. Mind if I basically use the gist of that to fix it?
As for the redacted, I saw a similar thing in the story bible and assumed it was just fine to do that kind of thing. Ah well, easily fixed. :$
ANYWAY, back to the OP and the point of this thread, can anyone tell me if the combat doc looks properly formatted so far? I'd like to know before I sink my teeth too deeply into sex scenes. Thanks for all the help and constructive criticism so far!
Edited the intelligence section as per Savin's suggestion. Also I agree the name is a bit of a mouthful and somewhat out of place, so 'Greater Immortal Jellies' will just be the literal translation of the Auvan name, though I've yet to think of a good replacement name yet.
Rapejellies?
For something a little more serious, what about "eggfloaters" or "ovavian"?
I don't think that's something that should be in the game. It doesn't fit with the way the Codex is supposed to work and it doesn't fit with the overall writing aesthetic. If something HAS to be hidden, say something like "The doctor, whose identity has been concealed by Xenogen..." or "The colonists of this planet (the name and coordinates of which are classified information)..."
That little bit of extra effort makes it so much better.
(Also none of this is directed at you, princess. I don't shoot messengers.)
>Kiha Corp is currently the top AI manufacturer in the galaxy.
>Not a single (canon) Tsundere in the entire game.
>Not a single (canon) Tsundere in the entire game.
Um... what?
Who is this addressed toward? Neither tsundere nor AI have been a major focus of this thread.
I clicked Misty's [REDACTED] thingy and the first thing it showed me was KihaCorp with its AI thingy and I was like "oh hey".
You even get that spam e-mail about their awesome new tsundere line of companion droids. If nothing will ever come out of that AND we won't get any other tsunderes, I'll be pretty pissed, but admire the masterful trolling.
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Damn, Jill's bust looks much nicer up close than I ever imagined. Curse you, tiny screens!
Anyway.
Even though it makes zero sense and is entirely cost-ineffective, I really like how GIJs use exclusively lust attacks, and how they generally defy the typical hentai standards of vile ovipositing rape-beasts that their weird appearance hints at. Hopefully, whatever options you have planned for their actual scenes, OP, willful submission on consecutive encounters will be one of them.
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This is planned and already has a route set up in the combat doc.
So! Last night I brainstormed some new, shortened names for the GIJs. Drum-roll please...
man o' lust
wanderlust
lustrap
I'm personally leaning towards wanderlust, but I thought I'd invite comment before I make a final decision.
Poor jellies. Do they not feel lust as well? The tentacle monster from CoC certainly did and there were even some blurbs acknowledging it. I think I'd feel more empathy towards them if I knew they were feeling good as well. It'd definitely be a sign of their intelligence and bridge the gap a little more.
Only mentioning this because I noticed there was no lust win.
Only mentioning this because I noticed there was no lust win.
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Really? I thought it started looking worse >.<
Why |\/| I didn't know you liked anal play!
I'm quite in line with your own thinking, "wanderlust" ftw. or see below.
I think that maybe the answer has been staring us in the face this whole time. We gave them a nickname while trying to figure out a nickname. I also agree with the lust win option, moreso because it opens another argument for sentience. I wouldn't mind them being harder to defeat lust-wise than most of the things I've met. On my main, I seriously cannot find anything that can beat me if I go lust.
I like wanderlust. Jelly is a little too simplistic and might cause confusion with the other jellyfish race mentioned above.
Hmm... IF I open the option for victory by lust, I'd want the Jellies to have immunity to tease and VERY high resistance to the other options. Part of the idea of this species is that they have adapted to be extremely resistant to lust-inducing agents, so that they are immune to their own arsenal. That's why their item drop grants temporary lust immunity. Mind you, I'm not discounting the possibility.
I think that tease immunity is a bit much. If they have lust as a biological function (aka they procreate) and they consider whatever chimeric abomination that Steele Jr. is, at the moment, a potential breeding mate, consensual or not, then a sexual teasing from Steele would have some affect upon them, though potentially QUITE diminished it would be there. I'd say if you simply made them 90% resistent to ALL lust attacks that would do the trick. Maybe the percentage should be tweaked but it's a good starting point.
I understand you're not wanting to abridge the lore of your species to make them easier to fight; that's fine. The thing is, basically every other lust-damage option (except the Goovolver) is considerably weaker than a powered-up tease. However, that's an easy fix - the wanderlusts (I'm rolling with that name for now) have never encountered something like the gray goo before, so they have no reason to have evolved defense against it. You could allow the Goovolver and Goozooka to do full damage for that reason.
Also, the bio-whip (or whatever it is, I've never used it before) acts by directly stimulating the sexual pleasure center of the brain (I think. Smutosaur is acting up for me so I can't check atm), so maybe there's an opening there too.
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Eh, Fair enough. I suppose there will be plenty of time to balance these guys later.
I agree that the goo weapons can do full lust damage. They and the slut ray should be decent options. As for the bio-whip, smutosaur doesn't say anything about direct-to-brain connection, just that it administers drugs on contact.
At this point, I think I've decided that Wanderlust is the best name. I'll be changing the documents shortly to reflect this.
[Edit] Conversion finished, the codex and combat docs now reflect the new name!
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