He was writing it but as stated before he didn't finish it and cut it out instead.
[WIP] Vanae maiden "expansion"
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Nobody, myself included, wants to risk adding to jim's content and possibly fucking it up.
That said, it's always good to give people a reason to go back to the older worlds. Don't be scared off of it.
JimT especialy later on at writing carrier for TiTS become deep perfectioninst. And that made him take decision to quit smut writing since all this thinking how each new writing of his must be at least as perect as last one made him take more and more time to write so he at one point decide to break this circle.
Well putting aside the specter of JimT
Nice to see someone tackling the Vanae as they are by far my favorite race, as for anything to point out, You seem to have the Flea option in repeat not first right now.
For later options are you going to be adding unique meetings when not pregnant as well as dialog with the children if taken to Tarvos? Also as sexual monogamy is looked down upon will there be options for the maiden to be pregnant by others as well or will their be an elope option after a while?
Nice to see someone tackling the Vanae as they are by far my favorite race, as for anything to point out, You seem to have the Flea option in repeat not first right now.
For later options are you going to be adding unique meetings when not pregnant as well as dialog with the children if taken to Tarvos? Also as sexual monogamy is looked down upon will there be options for the maiden to be pregnant by others as well or will their be an elope option after a while?
Not forget Ryubosj that aside giving birth to twins Vanae will give her daughters to her twin sister to watch over or nurse while she will herself go out hunt. So it may not be so easy to tell that Vanae children from PC and Vanae maiden will be moved to Tavros. Well only if there would be this vanae twins siter moved there as well. Jim pov on vanae was really tilted toward "twin vision" 
That was my point, in the doc Eldrich has this sectionNot forget Ryubosj that aside giving birth to twins Vanae will give her daughters to her twin sister to watch over or nurse while she will herself go out hunt. So it may not be so easy to tell that Vanae children from PC and Vanae maiden will be moved to Tavros. Well only if there would be this vanae twins siter moved there as well. Jim pov on vanae was really tilted toward "twin vision"
Even if you aren't capable of learning good English, even if you aren't capable of not posting whatever just came into your head like a seven year old with ADD, it'd be really, really good if you didn't post complete bullshit you just came up with on the spot. I wouldn't mind if you hadn't been in this community for, what, five years now, or if there had been the slightest amount of improvement in your posting during all that time. But jesus christ you've managed to squirt out more than five and a half thousand posts into the drinking water on here, and your diarrhea ain't letting up. There are limits.
If you cannot do anything else, at least stop lying about shit you clearly know nothing about, because occasionally newbies mistake you as somebody who does, due to the aforementioned post count. To clarify, JimT did not stop posting on here because he was a "deep perfectioninst". Occasionally think about not posting, or bothering to spend ten seconds researching the question or answer you're about to. Thanks.
@RyubosJ
Yes, I'm planning on that too, but i'll wrap the repeatable stuff first.
Yes.
Getting her pregnant by others is a good idea, taking her nature in account. I'll think about this, even if i was planning more on a elopement kind of thing.
Yes, I'm planning on that too, but i'll wrap the repeatable stuff first.
Yes.
Getting her pregnant by others is a good idea, taking her nature in account. I'll think about this, even if i was planning more on a elopement kind of thing.
Ignoring the rough post from nonesuch, I do think that an expansion to the vanae would be nice. I hope this sees the light of accepted submissions.
I'll believe it when I see it, the only character to successfully get a partial expansion was Inessa and that was only to unlock the belt she's wearing in order to allow fucking her properly and that was a small addition. All other projects others have tried to take up seem to fail and said writers who take them up all seem to mysteriously vanish from the site.
Edit: I swear there's gotta be some curse on JimT's stuff if people are disappearing >.> somehow Franks managed to get past with their skin intact and still around and kicking.
Edit: I swear there's gotta be some curse on JimT's stuff if people are disappearing >.> somehow Franks managed to get past with their skin intact and still around and kicking.
Never fear @Ethereal Dragon. I'll be here for a looong time. I'll finish this up anyway, even if chances of getting it approved are low, writing is a pleasure of mine and i'll be satisfied just knowing i inished it.
Damn, JimT is gone and it's clear he won't be back. Can't we just move on and finish what he left undone.
Damn, JimT is gone and it's clear he won't be back. Can't we just move on and finish what he left undone.
Only @RanmaChan can help you now.
Also I can now take comfort in the fact that I am merely the 2nd worst poster on this forum.
Also I can now take comfort in the fact that I am merely the 2nd worst poster on this forum.
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I'm not sure why you're attaching a bogey man to things attached to JimT when most submissions flake, not things related to his.
Chill.
Chill.
Ah, Ranmachan already did it. Well, that's fine. It's... n-not like I wanted t-to... anyway. I don't even like c-correcting spelling a-and grammar.. S-shut up!
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I mean, you can still help out, there are still some errors.
It's not really a matter of asking.
It's not really a matter of asking.
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Ranma hasn't finished yet. It would very impolite of me to ask another person to review, since I already asked Ranmachan.
I hope that doesn't mean that I am the worst poster on the forums now? I will tone down the Warhammer 40K stuff I swear!
@Eldritch I don't mind other people taking a look at the document, asking for my help doesn't sign you to a contract with me, lol. I was actually rather flattered when you PMed me to be honest.
Also, input from multiple people can be a good thing, so long as you know how to handle it. More eyes on the document means that more errors can be found and fixed, but having more people making suggestions also means that your original creativity/intent can be lost.
As long two people will not work on the same part of gdoc they could work on one gdoc. I seen in last month or two gdoc's been QC-ed by 2-3 ppl almost at the same time and they somehow managed not to mess up each other work in there. So chances is that Ranma and someone eles work wil not mess whole gdoc (chances still are but why assume already the worst outcome?).
Alright, I have finished editing what you have there. Let me know when you have finished working on another good chunk and I will take another look.
That is good to know, it means I can keep posting Warhammer meme garbage!
That is good to know, it means I can keep posting Warhammer meme garbage!
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Whaaaaaaat? We are Legion! JOIN US!
https://forum.fenoxo.com/threads/favourite-wh40k-faction-general-discussion.9537/page-6
(Pssst, vote for Tyranids so I can win! Muahaha!)
Dropped some new stuff on the dock. Let me know what you people think about it when you have the time.
@RanmaChan and @Vio: You are free to drop your comments, but I will be stuck with work in the next two days, so I probably won't work on the doc for a while. Thanks in advance, You guys are a great help.
@RanmaChan and @Vio: You are free to drop your comments, but I will be stuck with work in the next two days, so I probably won't work on the doc for a while. Thanks in advance, You guys are a great help.
