Didn't you read? They are "totally not space kitsune"! Besides, nothing says there can't be more than one of anything, so long as they are unique enough.
[WIP]The Huline: Totally Not Space Kitsune(Race + NPC ideas) /Hichiko's Back For Real Now Edition
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So good news, bad news.
Good news: I got more of Hachitide's document done
Bad news: I'm not updated the existing doc as the Huline thing's a no-go. Fenoxo got back to me and basically told me what I knew for a while: The stuff I wrote when I started isn't up to snuff. So I'm going back to the beginning and starting over again. Doesn't mean I'm taking all the documents down, but I'm going to give them a major overhaul. Don't know how long it will take, but I'll get it done.
I'd be lying if I said I was okay with this, but it's the only way I'll improve so yeah...
Good news: I got more of Hachitide's document done
Bad news: I'm not updated the existing doc as the Huline thing's a no-go. Fenoxo got back to me and basically told me what I knew for a while: The stuff I wrote when I started isn't up to snuff. So I'm going back to the beginning and starting over again. Doesn't mean I'm taking all the documents down, but I'm going to give them a major overhaul. Don't know how long it will take, but I'll get it done.
I'd be lying if I said I was okay with this, but it's the only way I'll improve so yeah...
So long ago (feels like ages, that old forum site 
) you started as, if I recall or my perception failed me, a relatively new writer. You've expanded, gathered critique, and have some experience now. This is but another step for you to take, one you most certainly can, to being better than you are now and were. I'd wish good luck, but I doubt you need it with how dedicated you are.
) you started as, if I recall or my perception failed me, a relatively new writer. You've expanded, gathered critique, and have some experience now. This is but another step for you to take, one you most certainly can, to being better than you are now and were. I'd wish good luck, but I doubt you need it with how dedicated you are.
I could write some long winded excuse about college courses and work and family death and all that usual nonsense, but you've heard it a dozen times before from people far better than me so I won't go into detail.
To summarize, I'm finally done, graduated, looking for a job, and finished mourning. As such, I now have a lot of free time to deliberate over fixing the Huline stuff. That however is what troubles me. I spent months writing, re-weriting, re-re-writing, and then scrapping changes to the documents because I didn't think it came out smoothly. Even now, I've settled on just rewriting portions of the document rather than starting from scratch, but I'm not sure it's good enough. I might even just commission someone to write the Huline pitching scenes as I just can't nail down sex from the catching perspective.
I dunno. So yeah, not dead, not gone, not abandoned. Sorry for the long ass hiatus. I updated the changelog to show what I've done.
To summarize, I'm finally done, graduated, looking for a job, and finished mourning. As such, I now have a lot of free time to deliberate over fixing the Huline stuff. That however is what troubles me. I spent months writing, re-weriting, re-re-writing, and then scrapping changes to the documents because I didn't think it came out smoothly. Even now, I've settled on just rewriting portions of the document rather than starting from scratch, but I'm not sure it's good enough. I might even just commission someone to write the Huline pitching scenes as I just can't nail down sex from the catching perspective.
I dunno. So yeah, not dead, not gone, not abandoned. Sorry for the long ass hiatus. I updated the changelog to show what I've done.
Hah! Back from the brink, and better than ever! Can't wait to see what you have in store, man!
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The guy making this haven't visited the forum in a year, of course its not goin to be worked anytime soon.
