[WIP] Parasitic cock

Thebiologist

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I'm back at writing this after writing a combat encounter for CoC2 and finishing editing my other project. Today I wrote about 3.2k words, basically a dream and a half. Keep in mind that even if I finish this, it's still not possible to submit it as the npc veto still stands.
 

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Update today with 2.7k words. After a series of bizarre dreams, you come face to face with the parasite you're hosting, and to your surprise, she's quite talkative and has a mission to fulfill.
 
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Oh my, I like this. Bug-cock is underrated. Once I am back on PC I will provide edits. Do you want spelling/grammar only or sentence flow as well?

Mainly grammar. If you can catch a spelling error that's cool too. As for flow, if you find something odd, sure, point it out, but I've got that mostly the way I want.
 
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Update today with 2.5k words. I keep working on the dreamspace, which is basically the place where you converse with your parasitic cock in dreams and get to do some technical stuff like removing the cock or restoring it to its original appearance. there are a few more things to take care of, and I'm unsure if I should add sex scenes there. The whole doc is already over 27k words and I expect it to get to 30k+ without sex scenes.
 

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Update today over 2k words. It mainly involved cock modifications, a scene for meeting the mother again after her hibernation and a couple of scenes I forgot to add that pop up if you somehow remove your aphrodisiac and /or ovipositor flags. The aphrodisiac one is about 1k words and features you getting off of your own aphrodisiacs completely hands-free.

Only a few things missing now: appearance, a good end where you accept your destiny and save/enslave the universe and the final sex starvation mechanics (The parasite gets quirky if you don't have sex regularly and annoys you constantly).
 
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another update today. this one is small with 1.7k words and covers her appearance screen and half of the good end.
 

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Update today with 2.5k words. I've written a good chunk of the good end, but there's still more to go. Here's a peek:

Once inside our cousin's ship, we're taken to a meeting room. There's only [cousin.name] and [cousing.hisHer] bodyguard of course. "Cousin! Glad to have you here." [cousin.name] chuckles and grins. "I have good news. We've found a planet nearby. Well, it's a moon to be more precise. It's habitable enough. I'm afraid we don't have enough supplies to feed everyone on board, you see. We'll take you there and then come pick you up once we've restocked. Meanwhile, why don't you relax in your quarters? We'll call you once we arrive."

A pair of armed goons enter the room and escort us to us "quarters". As expected, the place is barely livable. It's basically a prison cell, with a simple bed and a bathroom. Luckily we don't have to stay there for much, as we arrive at our destination in a few hours.

A heavily armed saurmorian - our cousin's bodyguard - opens the door and guides us towards the exit. [cousin.name] is already waiting for us there, leaned against the wall and sporting [cousing.hisHer] signature smirk.

"Look at this beauty, cousin. Pearly sands, crystal clear waters - quite the tropical paradise. Consider this a vacation." Our cousin descends the ramp and sets foot on the beach, while we stand besides the saurmorian. "Oh my, it's warm and the sun is shining. This place is marvelous. You should be thankful we've found it for you."

"We hope you enjoy it, then" We respond, mimicking our cousin's smirk. [cousin.heShe] turns back, confused at first, but soon realizes [cousin.hisHer] situation and tries to rush back into the ship. It's too late, though. The ramp is already being lifted. "Wait!" is the last desperate word our cousin manages to yell, as [cousin.heShe] tries in vain to reach the ramp.

"My queen." The saurmorian bows to you. "We're ready to pick up your crew."
 

Thebiologist

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Update today with 2k words. Finished the good end. I'll try to finish the feeding mechanics soon and then work on editing.
 

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update today with 3.3k words. I wrote the final part of the whole thing, but might actually revisit it since I'm not entirely comfortable with how it ends. I guess I could make it a bad end, but I don't like those, or I could make a sex scene with the cloaked woman, but I don't like forcing sex. So, the other option is a special masturbation scene.

Well, now I should go review my stuff. Then, the pussy designer is next.
 

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Love it, though it could use a bit of work with the convos and ending. Maybe there could be an option to say "Yes, but not right now" to her, because the constant asking is bit annoying. Also, perhaps eventually getting her over to your side to change her ways. That there is only one way to end it seems a bit a shame.
 
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