[WIP] Momo and Katiya

[Doots]

What's better than a kui-tan boi? A kui-tan boi with a switch mistress.

So here you go Momo and Katiya

Momo is a subby kui-tan boi who wears a chastity cage
and Katiya is a switch mistress who doesn't know that she's into being a sub as well as being a dom, so you need to introduce her to the wonderful world of submission.

If you want to ask anything or make comments on the doc feel free to do so

 

[Xeivous]

Right off the bat it's an interesting idea. Though I gotta say that you really need to redo the first run-in with Momo. It's way too short and feels awkward and rushed. Like you gotta work your way up through describing the boi instead of just slapping us with a couple of adjectives.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

You had me at kui-tan.

 

[Freed85]

I gave it a look, like I've said before really like the idea of this. Left a suggestion to help cut back some echoing in Momo's appearance screen.

I gotta agree with Xeivous in that the initial encounter with Momo you should describe him a little bit more, throw in something about his ruby-like red eyes and brown fur since you cover his attire. Something like when he says "I'm sorry," and he whimpers throw in a small bit mentioning his female like appearance or his eye's meeting your own.

Still can't wait to see where this goes Doots!

 

[moobere]

Oh look Doots is back to making me discover new kinks that i'm into...YAY!

 

[Doots]

Though I gotta say that you really need to redo the first run-in with Momo. It's way too short and feels awkward and rushed. Like you gotta work your way up through describing the boi instead of just slapping us with a couple of adjectives.

I altered the initial encounter a bit, mostly made the description better. I didn't touch the length much since the scene is supposed to be a short where you don't really get a chance to interact with him.

 

[MateMint]

Really like this idea. Making a chain of command from PC --> Katiya --> Momo.

I do however have a suggestion for you: Since Momo is a sub and his ''equipment'' is caged up, it might be a good idea to describe his ass in the ''Apperance'' option. Since that will most likely be a male Pc's way of having a go at him. I know it's shortly described in the intro scene, but adding it to the ''Apperance'' option seems a good idea.

 

[Doots]

Really like this idea. Making a chain of command from PC --> Katiya --> Momo.

The chain of command can also be Katiya --> PC --> Momo if the PC so desires and it can be changed at any moment since the chain of command doesn't extend beyond the bedroom.

 

[Reaper113]

Do you have to let momo suck you off to meet katiya since some players might be straight

 

[Doots]

Do you have to let momo suck you off to meet katiya since some players might be straight

No. I will include an option to say no to him and still unlock the content.

 

[Doots]

@BumblingBee Did a few sketches of Momo

Spoiler: Momo

Spoiler: Another Momo

Spoiler: Katiya and Momo

 

[Doots]

So I probably should announce this here that people don't get confused

Momo and Katiya will be on hiatus until further notice. This is because I'm working on a commission from @Freed85 and after that I'm probably doing either Verusha expac, or startingy thragen dude.

Now does this mean that I won't be finishing Momo and Katiya? No, I'm still planning on finishing them but I don't know when.

 

[princezilla]

So I probably should announce this here that people don't get confused

Momo and Katiya will be on hiatus until further notice. This is because I'm working on a commission from @Freed85 and after that I'm probably doing either Verusha expac, or startingy thragen dude.

Now does this mean that I won't be finishing Momo and Katiya? No, I'm still planning on finishing them but I don't know when.

This saddens me but it will be nice to see more of Verusha. Tell me, will her expac add a varient of her heat scene for anal heat?

 

[Doots]

Guess who's back

Spoiler

so yeah momo is getting resumed...

 

[Xeivous]

Two month hiatus...

I think that's a record for shortest hiatus.

 

[Dark67titan]

Two month hiatus...

I think that's a record for shortest hiatus.

your probably right