[WIP] Momo and Katiya

Doots

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What's better than a kui-tan boi? A kui-tan boi with a switch mistress.

So here you go Momo and Katiya

Momo is a subby kui-tan boi who wears a chastity cage
and Katiya is a switch mistress who doesn't know that she's into being a sub as well as being a dom, so you need to introduce her to the wonderful world of submission.

If you want to ask anything or make comments on the doc feel free to do so
 

Xeivous

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Right off the bat it's an interesting idea. Though I gotta say that you really need to redo the first run-in with Momo. It's way too short and feels awkward and rushed. Like you gotta work your way up through describing the boi instead of just slapping us with a couple of adjectives.
 

Freed85

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I gave it a look, like I've said before really like the idea of this. Left a suggestion to help cut back some echoing in Momo's appearance screen.

I gotta agree with Xeivous in that the initial encounter with Momo you should describe him a little bit more, throw in something about his ruby-like red eyes and brown fur since you cover his attire. Something like when he says "I'm sorry," and he whimpers throw in a small bit mentioning his female like appearance or his eye's meeting your own.

Still can't wait to see where this goes Doots!
 

moobere

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Oh look Doots is back to making me discover new kinks that i'm into...YAY!
 

Doots

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Though I gotta say that you really need to redo the first run-in with Momo. It's way too short and feels awkward and rushed. Like you gotta work your way up through describing the boi instead of just slapping us with a couple of adjectives.

I altered the initial encounter a bit, mostly made the description better. I didn't touch the length much since the scene is supposed to be a short where you don't really get a chance to interact with him.
 
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MateMint

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Really like this idea. Making a chain of command from PC --> Katiya --> Momo.

I do however have a suggestion for you: Since Momo is a sub and his ''equipment'' is caged up, it might be a good idea to describe his ass in the ''Apperance'' option. Since that will most likely be a male Pc's way of having a go at him. I know it's shortly described in the intro scene, but adding it to the ''Apperance'' option seems a good idea.
 

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Really like this idea. Making a chain of command from PC --> Katiya --> Momo.
The chain of command can also be Katiya --> PC --> Momo if the PC so desires and it can be changed at any moment since the chain of command doesn't extend beyond the bedroom.
 
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Reaper113

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Do you have to let momo suck you off to meet katiya since some players might be straight
 

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Do you have to let momo suck you off to meet katiya since some players might be straight
No. I will include an option to say no to him and still unlock the content.
 
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@BumblingBee Did a few sketches of Momo
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Doots

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So I probably should announce this here that people don't get confused

Momo and Katiya will be on hiatus until further notice. This is because I'm working on a commission from @Freed85 and after that I'm probably doing either Verusha expac, or startingy thragen dude.

Now does this mean that I won't be finishing Momo and Katiya? No, I'm still planning on finishing them but I don't know when.
 

princezilla

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So I probably should announce this here that people don't get confused

Momo and Katiya will be on hiatus until further notice. This is because I'm working on a commission from @Freed85 and after that I'm probably doing either Verusha expac, or startingy thragen dude.

Now does this mean that I won't be finishing Momo and Katiya? No, I'm still planning on finishing them but I don't know when.
This saddens me but it will be nice to see more of Verusha. Tell me, will her expac add a varient of her heat scene for anal heat?
 

Doots

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Guess who's back
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so yeah momo is getting resumed...
 
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