[WIP] Jaeger the Human

[BubbleLord]

"I'll tell you right now, I'm not letting you fuck me."
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Alright, so I'm going to go ahead and go through with it. I've been bitching and moaning about how I hate having to work Parsers into my writing but I love hating myself too much to put it off. I'm going to be trying to write out a very simple encounter. It could become something more if more plebs demand it and throw money at me, but this is seriously not meant to become anything more than some basic-ass shit. If you don't like it, then don't hate on it. If someone who isn't cool begs or even demands me to make more content, I'll ignore them or even tell you to kindly shut up. Kindly.


Jaeger the Human, as it sounds, will be a Human encountered on Mhen'ga. How? He crashlands within the Naleen part of the jungle and sets up shop. Where that is exactly, I have no clue. Steele will get either sent and Email or see him come crashing down, though. Once this happens, Steele can go out and find the crash-site and Jaeger. He's going to be very straight forward and basically be a guy who likes anyone feminine but willing to fuck since he's basically stuck on the planet. Steele will be able to talk to him a little and have sex. Super basic. This is really to help me get used to the parsers and set a POSSIBLE foundation for more.


Here's the link to the Document allowing comments. At the time this is going up, it'll be a skeleton. I'll be editing below to showcase the progress, however, so please look to the list beneath this for how much of Jaeger is done.


Planned Features

• Five Scenes - Give Oral, Get Oral, Take Anal, Get Creampied (For Vagina-Folk), Get Plowed (For Traps)

Currently-Ready Features

• Email/Scene for Spawning him.

• Scene for Encountering him.

• Scenes for Talking/Approaching him.

• Looks/Appearance Scene when talking to him.

• Sections of his talk options (roughly half)

• Help Him - Get him to the town where he'll talk to some nice people and get off-world. Will be the initial ending for Jaeger's encounter.
  

While this isn't my first time on the smut block, it is my first time using TiTS' smut parsers and shit. Any comments on the doc, in the thread, or wherever to help me would be hugely appreciated. I plan to have friends proofread, but if you volunteer then fucking awesome. This is a project that is hopefully (at the very least) going to give us another "true dude" in the stars to have sex with. Thanks for reading this terribly presented thread and I hope to have some advice from those of you with prior experience while I work on this. Let's get out there and make more smut =3=!

 

[jarllee97]

Holy shit. A normal human. I'm curious to see where this goes

 

[Etis]

"I'll tell you right now, I'm not letting you fuck me."
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Hey, a turnaround is a fair play.

• Help Him - Get him to the town where he'll talk to some nice people and get off-world. Will be the initial ending for Jaeger's encounter.
  

 

So, no emergency beacons in future?

 

[BubbleLord]

So, no emergency beacons in future?

There is one, but where he lands and a few other factors are the reason it's about jackshit worthless and ends up getting disabled.

 

[Etis]

There is one, but where he lands and a few other factors are the reason it's about jackshit worthless and ends up getting disabled.

Hm... Taxi from Vanae territory is only 40 credits. All you need is a long-range transmitter. Any transmitter, even primitive Myr's Morse code radio works.

 

[BubbleLord]

Hm... Taxi from Vanae territory is only 40 credits. All you need is a long-range transmitter. Any transmitter, even primitive Myr's Morse code radio works.

Then I'll change it to where he's just uninformed of what's on Mhen'ga. Clearly I know nothing either, so it's not like a guy who's not even heard of the planet before would know what's there. I guess his "help" scene will involve you handing him a ridiculously low amount of credits and informing him. Good to know this stuff for later, though. I'll need to take into account how dirt cheap taxis are.

 

[Xeivous]

I'm not sure what it says about this game when a normal human encounter is something new. That said I am a bit sad about not being able to stick my dick in him and hope that he'll at least be a gentleman and give a reach around when the sex scenes come around.

 

[BubbleLord]

I'm not sure what it says about this game when a normal human encounter is something new. That said I am a bit sad about not being able to stick my dick in him and hope that he'll at least be a gentleman and give a reach around when the sex scenes come around.

The reason I'm steering clear of buttstuff initially is due to his personality and initial encounter parameters. At first, he's just a guy open to fun rather than willing to give up his anal virginity. If I end up expanding on Jaeger, however, I do plan to have some content for him being on the receiving end. Reach-arounds are definitely going to be a thing (anal orgasms aren't for everyone, I totally get that).

 

[Xeivous]

The reason I'm steering clear of buttstuff initially is due to his personality and initial encounter parameters. At first, he's just a guy open to fun rather than willing to give up his anal virginity. If I end up expanding on Jaeger, however, I do plan to have some content for him being on the receiving end. Reach-arounds are definitely going to be a thing (anal orgasms aren't for everyone, I totally get that).

Neat.


Any chance on him commenting on PCs more endowed than he is?

 

[Etis]

Then I'll change it to where he's just uninformed of what's on Mhen'ga. Clearly I know nothing either, so it's not like a guy who's not even heard of the planet before would know what's there. I guess his "help" scene will involve you handing him a ridiculously low amount of credits and informing him. Good to know this stuff for later, though. I'll need to take into account how dirt cheap taxis are.





 

40 credits are not exactly dirt cheap, but manageable for sure.

I'm not sure what it says about this game when a normal human encounter is something new. That said I am a bit sad about not being able to stick my dick in him and hope that he'll at least be a gentleman and give a reach around when the sex scenes come around.

Well, space is mostly populated by 95% humans with animal ears and tails. So... It is a tricky situation. Totally normal human is rare, but I can't say that there are notable amount non-humans as well, unless you are hardcore xenophobic.

 

[BubbleLord]

Any chance on him commenting on PCs more endowed than he is?

I'm not exactly sure how I'd go about doing that with the parsers. If someone knows how and tells me how to do that sort of thing, I'd be willing to write the extra dialogue and such to accommodate it. Considering the massive amounts of hyper fans out there, I'm sure everyone will have a bigger dick than him one way or another.

 

[Xeivous]

I'm not exactly sure how I'd go about doing that with the parsers. If someone knows how and tells me to do that sort of thing, I'd be willing to write the extra dialogue and such to accommodate it. Considering the massive amounts of hyper fans out there, I'm sure everyone will have a bigger dick than him one way or another.

Depends on how exactly you want to develop the character and want to express his sexual history. Exasperation and/or jealousy are decent themes to shoot for, possibly disbelief if you go hyper or teasing for pcs who otherwise fit into a trap body type.


Also as a sort of logic thing that occured to me, shouldn't Jaeger have a different reaction to Steele coming upon him if they're a morph that's native to Mhen'Ga?

 

[BubbleLord]

Depends on how exactly you want to develop the character and want to express his sexual history. Exasperation and/or jealousy are decent themes to shoot for, possibly disbelief if you go hyper or teasing for pcs who otherwise fit into a trap body type.


Also as a sort of logic thing that occured to me, shouldn't Jaeger have a different reaction to Steele coming upon him if they're a morph that's native to Mhen'Ga?

I'm trying to make it clear it's not so much I'm ill-prepared on Jaeger's front. It falls down to the fact that I've not been able to find how variations are prepared for scenes and such. I'm looking around right now and the closest I've found isn't exactly clear.


If anyone who knows how to set variations in the scene based upon the the PC's appearance (be it through code or parsers) then I'd like to know via PM or here so I can amend the specific parts. I might figure it out with a bit of looking around, but this is something that I'm encountering right off the bat as a problem.


Edit: While a native of Mhen'ga could potentially trigger it, I imagine that landing in the Naleen territory dictates more-so a fear/caution specifically of them. For now, I'm following what one of the guides mentioned to list that he has an additional line if someone is part naga/snake.

 

[Krynh]

I'm not exactly sure how I'd go about doing that with the parsers. If someone knows how and tells me how to do that sort of thing, I'd be willing to write the extra dialogue and such to accommodate it. Considering the massive amounts of hyper fans out there, I'm sure everyone will have a bigger dick than him one way or another.

It's not a parser statement for that, just write two sets of scenes one for non endowned and one for endowed and it will be coded in. 

 

[Lashcharge]

It's not a parser statement for that, just write two sets of scenes one for non endowned and one for endowed and it will be coded in. 

It's called a variable and it's done somewhat like this:


{if big penis:


___"Amazing! Such a big penis!"


/else:


___"What an average dick!"


}


Just replace the underscore.

 

[Vincent]

But does he want to kill all the titans?  :smugdog:


Jokes aside, a completely normal human male is certainly a welcome sight 

 

[Noob Salad]

Here's hoping for some silly mode blurbs.

 

[BubbleLord]

Putting in an update to say that Jaeger isn't dead. I've had a brain-fart when trying to work on him lately, but I'm gearing up to try and get his talking down and done.


That said, any proofreading taken on the document would be appreciated. While it is early to be doing such a thing, there are elements (such as variations) that I don't understand very well or have fleshed out solid enough that they're fairly final in their current state. Because of this, any sort of help whether it be error-related, coding-related, or logic/visualization-related is more than appreciated.

 

[Forced MEME]

I can't help too much with the parsers and code but it seems like you have a decent plan and a good character getting set up. I'll try to help proof it if I can.

 

[Lashcharge]

Posted some formatting stuff in there, you should apply those suggestions to the rest of the doc.


If you want to make it even easier to the coders, you could color the parsers and variables.

 

[BubbleLord]

I appreciate the tips taken/given so far. It certainly helped me clean up the doc and fix out some errors. Looking forward to further help/commentary =3=7

 

[Syrus]

I just want to say, as a straight, female player, that the idea there may eventually be another penis-having npc for my character to bone that doesn't also have boobs and/or a vagina is super exciting. Also, the character himself, from my skimming of the doc, looks pretty fantastic so far. Please do keep it up.

 

[BubbleLord]

It has been a VERY long time since I updated Jaeger, but since I've been back I've been looking into handling this guy. And uh... believe it or not, I've updated him with all of his questions! It might be missing some tags, but Jaeger is only missing his smut and final two sections of dialogue. TLDR...

Jaeger is only missing his sex scenes and the scene where Steele helps him out so he's rescued, then sees him off of Mhen'ga so he can go off and be a normal baseline human elsewhere! Hopefully, the help scene will be added on next... and from there, it'll be all glorious sexy stuff!

 

[BubbleLord]

A quick update =3=7

Jaeger the Human's non-smut content is now complete.

Now that I'll be able to start working on smut, I'd greatly appreciate people who are up to the task/willing to go over and review the previous content. Ideally, the goal will be to lengthen them tastefully (such as additional details), insert PC tags for custom appearances, and (if people are willing to put them in for editing/sprucing) even add additional content for different people. This means that if you're a taur who wants that human D, then add comments/basic ideas/blueprints for additional content. Any spelling and grammar checking is also appreciated. Basically, this is the stage where I'm going to start working on the smut and would prefer comments/revisions made by fans to further spruce up the content. If done correctly, this will GREATLY shorten the overall time it'd take for me when checking over the entire thing later on.

From here on, though, it's going to be blowjob and Steele-getting-pounded-in-the-ass/pussy central!

 

[Noob Salad]

But it says he's not going to let anyone fuck him. Presumably because he's a strong independent man who don't need no woman.

Slight disclaimer, I haven't actually read the doc yet.

 

[BubbleLord]

Exactly. ;^)

 

[Franks]

Holy shit. A normal human. I'm curious to see where this goes

There's a few normal human characters in the works, but none added to the game/sexable that I can think of.

 

[BubbleLord]

There's a few normal human characters in the works, but none added to the game/sexable that I can think of.

At the time that Jaeger was posted, human characters were either really old WIPs or just recent. They're also weren't any (last I checked, which was eons ago) that were human entirely. They had something like Ausar ears or a tail somewhere in the mix. However, it's good to know that other people have decided to try and follow suit in the void/kept up their work.

 

[BubbleLord]

Woohoo for brief progress updates!

All of Jaeger's positions are locked in in terms of his sex scenes. Short summaries below =3=b

• For all hardcore porn fans out there, you'll recognize his "Give Oral" scene as the common facefuck position. AKA, Steele lays back on a nice piece of metal, leans their head back, and gets face-rammed.
• The "Get Oral" scene is going to involve Steele leaned up against a wall with one leg over Jaeger's shoulder, getting sucked off or eaten out. Or both!
• His "Take Anal" scene will involve Steele sitting cowgirl style, riding Jaeger in a rut that turns... sensual.
• "Get Creamed" will involve Steele sitting in Jaeger's chair and bred like a good and proper cumdump! Expect it to be messy!
• And finally, "Get Plowed" is only for those feminine bitchboys out there, where a teasing wag of an ass turns into Steele laying facedown in some Mhen'ga soil while Jaeger smashes their prostate from on top of 'em!

The work has begun on his "Give Oral" scene already, but the other big point of this update is to add that I'll be looking for one or two additional scenes to likely throw onto him. Normally it'd cost a decent penny for a scene, but this is also to give Jaeger more content in general. These scenes, however, will either be chosen once I've just about finished him... or can be commissioned for a meager $5 each. Anyone who wants to get their scene in on this filthy human, just PM/Convo me or post here. From here on out, finishing Jaeger should be fairly simple and straight-forward. Hope everyone who's stuck around (like Lash who helped me fix and improve both the document formatting and the actual transitioning with buttons and parsers) enjoys where Jaeger is and where he's going to be soon =3=/

 

[BubbleLord]

Another new update, as I'm rounding down the first scene for Jaeger. Based on word counter, his first scene (Blowing Jaeger) is looking to roughly be 1200 at its shortest. This means it'll likely be a 1500~ish word minimum submission. Minimum basically assumes the worst case scenario of someone getting the shortest blurbs/variations, also not taking into account double/triple words from parsers.

TLDR: Jaeger is almost done fucking Steele's face (and another little bit). Just a bit more work and I can start working on his giving oral scenarios.