Hello fellow scientists I'm Requiem and this is my story...
(WARNING HERM WARNING)
So this is Io, she's a Tassai. I wanted her to be simple, but I wasn't satisfied so i kept adding things until I was. Both Io and the codex on Tassai are works in progress, but have enough written that I feel somewhat confident in posting them for the public's opinion. To be honest my morale is falling and I'm close to just calling them 'good enough' but I know I can do more. So far just one sex scene, a first time and repeat.
I was heavily inspired by the Asari and Protoss among other similar races.
Io the Tassai on Tavros
https://docs.google.com/document/d/10ovIuWXDkLLg0wqHaljzzoCWKO1j4oDVhI-K4qBr3ds/edit?usp=sharing
Codex here.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jaXdXG43kx1JZCTdX2PgLGwwadwF80ntojgpAi87Mvo/edit?usp=sharing
As this is my first attempt at writing smut I'm looking for feedback and criticism. What do you people like about this stuff? Did I go to far or not far enough? Did I break any rules I may have over looked? If something needs to be changed, tell me why and how. If a creator or another person who has submitted content could look it over and tell me what I need to do to make it better I would be very appreciative.
As a small note I have little to no free time right now. So I probably won't be able to comment or reply as fast as I would like. Same with making changes to my docs. Edit: In case any one was curious, I work construction with my father.
Cheers - Requiem
(WARNING HERM WARNING)
So this is Io, she's a Tassai. I wanted her to be simple, but I wasn't satisfied so i kept adding things until I was. Both Io and the codex on Tassai are works in progress, but have enough written that I feel somewhat confident in posting them for the public's opinion. To be honest my morale is falling and I'm close to just calling them 'good enough' but I know I can do more. So far just one sex scene, a first time and repeat.
I was heavily inspired by the Asari and Protoss among other similar races.
Io the Tassai on Tavros
https://docs.google.com/document/d/10ovIuWXDkLLg0wqHaljzzoCWKO1j4oDVhI-K4qBr3ds/edit?usp=sharing
Codex here.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jaXdXG43kx1JZCTdX2PgLGwwadwF80ntojgpAi87Mvo/edit?usp=sharing
As this is my first attempt at writing smut I'm looking for feedback and criticism. What do you people like about this stuff? Did I go to far or not far enough? Did I break any rules I may have over looked? If something needs to be changed, tell me why and how. If a creator or another person who has submitted content could look it over and tell me what I need to do to make it better I would be very appreciative.
As a small note I have little to no free time right now. So I probably won't be able to comment or reply as fast as I would like. Same with making changes to my docs. Edit: In case any one was curious, I work construction with my father.
Cheers - Requiem
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