Okay so with event submissions being closed I figured that I would post this here first so as to not step on any toes. Something that I have really wanted to see for a while was a bit of an expansion on the imprisonment content for Alissa after you get her to the Wayfort. So instead of just asking for that, I decided to go ahead and just write it up myself real quick (assumed at the time could easily squeeze 2 scenes into 8 pages), but that's not really how it turned out, because Alissa has 4 submission stages it essentially turned into 4 scenes with a different flavor and so now, I have this 29-page scene (it is mostly only that long because I added extra spacing to not be too confusing to the reader). Now, I know that I am a first-time writer and submissions have been closed, but I would like to preface that I have no intentions of using this as launchpad for other projects. I would be open to the possibility of writing more scenes for Alissa, but I have no further desires beyond that, and if that is unwanted, I will not push the issue. I'm kind of banking on the hope that development would also like to see some characters that could have gotten some more love be expanded upon before the game is finished, and I believe that Alissa is one of those characters. What we got with her was great, but I'm hoping you'll let me expand just a little bit more upon her. (After writing this scene I think I may understand why there's only so much content of her too, her subRange is really tedious to work through.)
So, if someone could give me an affirmative response on how development would feel about this that would be much appreciated, if it totally unwanted, I'll leave it alone, but I think I have a pretty good scene here and I'm really hoping that you all will see it too. Thanks for all of your hard work, develepors, writers, and editors. Speaking of, if anyone would like to peer-review the scene and leave comments those are turned on and would be much appreciated. Thanks!
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CoC2 Alissa 'Rail Her' Scene