typos and etc
- Thread starter PanzerGuitar00
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maybe unitalicize this part, and/or put it in extra quoters, just to make it stand out more and show shes putting exxageration into it
Semith's booty call:
"
He grips your flaring, broodmother-sized hips and winches himself upwards. Over your shoulder, you watch the impish male stand up and position himself so his feet are on your scaled legs
; on the tips of his toes, he can press his hard,[....]"
line break and extra semicolon.
"
He grips your flaring, broodmother-sized hips and winches himself upwards. Over your shoulder, you watch the impish male stand up and position himself so his feet are on your scaled legs
; on the tips of his toes, he can press his hard,[....]"
line break and extra semicolon.
Rival BBQ on Phaedra:
"Johana swaggers onto the shore and pops a beer bottle open against a chink the ‘taur’s carapace. "
Probably should be "[...] against a chink in the `taur's carapace."
"Johana swaggers onto the shore and pops a beer bottle open against a chink the ‘taur’s carapace. "
Probably should be "[...] against a chink in the `taur's carapace."
The Bouncer (Bimbo) - Hypercock seduce:
"[...]kind of chemical tang that tingles your nostrils.That same sort[...]"
Missing space after period.
"[...]kind of chemical tang that tingles your nostrils.That same sort[...]"
Missing space after period.