typos and etc

PanzerGuitar00

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Oct 18, 2016
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maybe unitalicize this part, and/or put it in extra quoters, just to make it stand out more and show shes putting exxageration into it

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Skunkupine

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Jun 17, 2023
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Semith's booty call:

"
He grips your flaring, broodmother-sized hips and winches himself upwards. Over your shoulder, you watch the impish male stand up and position himself so his feet are on your scaled legs

; on the tips of his toes, he can press his hard,[....]"

line break and extra semicolon.