typos and etc

[Wafflesnake]

I had not been told that before. I will course correct in the future.

in short: if you copy/paste the exact incorrect text (and some extra in the event its a parser or something thats spliced together or just to narrow the search a bit), someone on the team can then immediately copy/paste that same exact thing and Ctrl+F without worrying about retyping the exact incorrect thing. this is especially helpful in the event that there's a backlog of typos, i wouldn't want to manually be typing a large number of phrases to find and fix

 

[Theron]

“Praise be... Such a gift... A chance... For redemption...
Sighing with resignation, you adjust your grip on your grenade launcher, knowing what has to happen next. At least you tried.

Itallics bleed (missing ")

Tail Sucking
begin to remove your Steele Tech hazard suit and light thong and plop yourself down on a more comfortable looking rock, last of your clothing coming off.

Missing a word at the beginning of the scene? 'The last'?

Of course, the prospect of taking such a massive rod, let alone two, is daunting even for a Treated girl such as yourself.

Not really a typo, but I think I'm a little insulted (6.6 cubic feet capacity). Behemoths have 12"-16" dicks, if I'm not mistaken.

These hardened men and women live fully in the moment, aware it may all be taken away from them tomorrow. It’s an attitude that’s undeniably intoxicating.
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Scraps of cloth flutter and fret in the racing gust of wind thanks to the speed ot the train under both of you, but her imperious stature remains unphased.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

Itallics bleed (missing ")

Missing a word at the beginning of the scene? 'The last'?

Wait tainted cultist? Where's is this encounter?

 

[Theron]

Wait tainted cultist? Where's is this encounter?

Radwoods.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

Radwoods.

Oooh riiiiiight. Sorry.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

missing space

“Oh that’s adorable,” coos Vedice,

 

[XBoxMaster131]

this is an oversight/error, as im seras sub and it sh0ould read "times given sera public blowjob" or something along those lines.

sorry for the screencap it was necessary for this one

 

[XBoxMaster131]

idk what this is meant to mean, is it just slang im not familiar with?

Which isn’t nearly enough. It’s not enough to just look pretty if you belong to me, bottom bitch; you gotta train. Get that thing up you on the regular, and sing my name as you do it.”

 

[XBoxMaster131]

missing space. had to do the screenshot here sorry

 

[Madam Materia]

“She believed and do anything her big brother and sister said to her.

From talking to Dizzy about Bizzy (while in the nursery if it matters). Should be "did" instead of "do".