maybe add an ellipses here
I want to be free! Like — like.” She spreads her wings, almost shyly.
I want to be free! Like — like.” She spreads her wings, almost shyly.
Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!
- Thread starter PanzerGuitar00
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in the azra talks, for some reason after asking about her stud, the option to ask about her daughters is greyed out. not idea why.
no, wait, now its fixed. that was weird..... maybe take a look at the code of it to be safe
ok, i figured it out. its because of the fact that you just came from the daughters talk option, then went to the stud talk option, thats when it gets greyed out. so i guess its like doing that to try and prevent a loop or something. thats still weird though, i think maybe you need to restructure the dialouge interaction so people dont think something is broken.
maybe capitalize "cow", really hammer it home as her new title, ya know?
Reaha, however, won’t have any of that, slamming her soft ass back down, making her “Steele’s cow” tattoo jiggle in the process.
Reaha, however, won’t have any of that, slamming her soft ass back down, making her “Steele’s cow” tattoo jiggle in the process.
this is a bit of a misnomer, since it sure aint synthetic anymore....
Del flashes you a giddy little grin and props herself up on her elbows, suddenly more interested in your neighbor than the lightly swollen alien pussy pressing against the flare of her synth-dick
Del flashes you a giddy little grin and props herself up on her elbows, suddenly more interested in your neighbor than the lightly swollen alien pussy pressing against the flare of her synth-dick
Azra scene on Myrellion. Oddly, it acknowledges my jetpack in the first paragraph, and then drops weird lines about wings. My character of course, doesn't have wings.
Properly outfitted, you take off with a beat of your wings. You’re going for a particular stalactite, one that is longer and thicker than most, while also being more spaced-out. Reaching it is easy; now comes the hard part: stability. It takes quite a bit of finesse to hover in such a cramped space — no wonder Azra didn’t feel up to the task despite also having wings. After a few moments, you manage to find the right rhythm for your wingbeat, but this turns out to be much more exhausting than you expected, so you set about completing the task as quickly as possible. (E: −5) Using a scalpel-like instrument provided by the scientist, you scrape lichen samples into one set of vials, then use a handheld laser cutter to collect samples of the rocky substrate, storing them into another set of vials.
Properly outfitted, you take off with a beat of your wings. You’re going for a particular stalactite, one that is longer and thicker than most, while also being more spaced-out. Reaching it is easy; now comes the hard part: stability. It takes quite a bit of finesse to hover in such a cramped space — no wonder Azra didn’t feel up to the task despite also having wings. After a few moments, you manage to find the right rhythm for your wingbeat, but this turns out to be much more exhausting than you expected, so you set about completing the task as quickly as possible. (E: −5) Using a scalpel-like instrument provided by the scientist, you scrape lichen samples into one set of vials, then use a handheld laser cutter to collect samples of the rocky substrate, storing them into another set of vials.