Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!

PanzerGuitar00

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maybe add an ellipses here


I want to be free! Like — like.” She spreads her wings, almost shyly.
 

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in the azra talks, for some reason after asking about her stud, the option to ask about her daughters is greyed out. not idea why.

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ok, i figured it out. its because of the fact that you just came from the daughters talk option, then went to the stud talk option, thats when it gets greyed out. so i guess its like doing that to try and prevent a loop or something. thats still weird though, i think maybe you need to restructure the dialouge interaction so people dont think something is broken.
 

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maybe capitalize "cow", really hammer it home as her new title, ya know?

Reaha, however, won’t have any of that, slamming her soft ass back down, making her “Steele’s cow” tattoo jiggle in the process.
 

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this is a bit of a misnomer, since it sure aint synthetic anymore....


Del flashes you a giddy little grin and props herself up on her elbows, suddenly more interested in your neighbor than the lightly swollen alien pussy pressing against the flare of her synth-dick
 

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Azra scene on Myrellion. Oddly, it acknowledges my jetpack in the first paragraph, and then drops weird lines about wings. My character of course, doesn't have wings.

Properly outfitted, you take off with a beat of your wings. You’re going for a particular stalactite, one that is longer and thicker than most, while also being more spaced-out. Reaching it is easy; now comes the hard part: stability. It takes quite a bit of finesse to hover in such a cramped space — no wonder Azra didn’t feel up to the task despite also having wings. After a few moments, you manage to find the right rhythm for your wingbeat, but this turns out to be much more exhausting than you expected, so you set about completing the task as quickly as possible. (E: −5) Using a scalpel-like instrument provided by the scientist, you scrape lichen samples into one set of vials, then use a handheld laser cutter to collect samples of the rocky substrate, storing them into another set of vials.
 

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Hopefully all fixed for the next release, up to this point.

maybe replace the hyphen with a smaller one. how do you even type the larger ones on a pc keyboard, serious question?
Some word processors like Microsoft Word and maybe Google Docs would sometimes stylize a "--" or " - " into an em dash (—), or any other variation of long dashes, assuming that option is toggled on for its auto-complete setting. With auto-complete off, you'll have to type a certain keycode to get those kinds of dashes, but I forget what they are exactly--I just know it's possible to type it.

I know it's been memed to death about em dashes being an A.I. writing tell, but sometimes it is also the fault of the tool being used and not necessarily A.I. Word processing auto-complete has been with us for at least a decade or two longer than mainstream A.I., so something to consider, I guess.


Since the Huskar twins on Uveto share a space with Shierra & Farine, you are unable to tell at a glance when they show up
The tile on which they reside is supposed to be a commons area--not quite a bar or commerce area, but a place where multiple NPCs can stack into. To make it easier to tell the NPCs apart, I gave the buttons assigned slots instead, so hopefully that will help with clarity.

Captain Khorgan can still attack with her sword while disarmed.
To prevent confusion, and to retain how integrated her weapon is in all of her attacks, Captain Khorgan will be immune to disarming attacks.

in the azra talks, for some reason after asking about her stud, the option to ask about her daughters is greyed out. not idea why.
This does seem to be intentional, so I've left it alone for now.

this is a bit of a misnomer, since it sure aint synthetic anymore....
True, but I believe it only describes it as "synth" to reference its origin, not necessarily that it is still a synthsheath.
 
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