Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!

LeDoraggo

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It had to happen sooner or later. Should be "come to", not "cum too". This is at the end of tribbing Azra in the shower.


You cum too in a pool of Azra’s cum, your scaly legs tangled in with your suula lover.
Could be also "You cum, too, in a pool of Azra's cum", as in, you're cooming on where she coomed, too
 

Jarylan

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Could be also "You cum, too, in a pool of Azra's cum", as in, you're cooming on where she coomed, too
I checked that, but based on context, the PC is regaining consciousness after passing out from pleasure.
 

Jarylan

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Two more errors I discovered with the yinglet TF.

First, to add to what was said before about breast size reduction, even without lactation, it reduces breast size down to flat. It should stop at C-cup.

Also, the dud/you can't TF anymore message seems MIA. Dunno if that's related to the breast issue or separate.
 
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Jarylan

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Typo in Shekka pregnancy. Unless there's a real clipping issue in TiTS, this should be on, not in.

An abrupt shifting in the weight of your belly causes you to orgasm on the spot! You collapse under the weight of your pregnant pleasure and writhe in the ground until it subsides.
 

Jarylan

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End of reverse pet play with Anno, riding her scene. Missing a space here.

A sense of unease crawls over you, sitting on her thighs, hardlight thrumming against yourtool.
 

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Your fingers sink deeply into your busty bosom as you look up at your chosen target, then, with a smile, you gentle shake them, making your titanic mammaries wobble oh-so-enticingly.
 

Jarylan

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Got this during a crotch tease. Not sure why it used the plural here, the character only has one cock.

You open your dress clothes and cute panties just enough to let your blue member dangles free.
 

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Yinglet Vagina Description said:
Occasional beads of girl-cum drip from your juicy pussy.The walls are silky smooth, making for a delightful surprise for your partners--not to mention the extra sensitivity being a plus for you.
 

Jarylan

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Hah, was going to mention this, but someone got to it first.

Glad someone is using the new TF, even if it's just for testing purposes.
 

Jarylan

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Azra is dealing with the tentacle wall, and I got handsy. We got an orphan Bo here for some reason.

incoherent moan, her eyes rolling back as her cock erupts like a geyser inside the suction cup.Bo
 

Jarylan

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Very end of the new Azra expedition, back at the ship. We've got some repeated text here.

Neither you nor the siren care that you’re both still slick with sweat from the expedition; your bodies need each other now. One moment, your lips are upon hers for a searing kiss; the next, her clothes are on the floor, as if she was never dressed to begin with, and you and Azra start to act as if possessed by a sexual frenzy. Neither you nor the siren care that you’re both still slick with sweat from the expedition; your bodies need each other now.
 

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At the end of the scene in the bedroom after Azra's Myrellion expedition. We're missing a "cock" here. Or dick. Or something. Not sure if it's a missing word or a parser failure.

pulling out your soft tapered and secretly marvelling as you watch a trickle of semi-clear cum ooze out of her pussy.
 

Jarylan

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After offering to hire Azra, we've got some rogue punctuation invading the sentence.

Obvious desire shines through {the quirk of your instinctive smile.