Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!

[LeDoraggo]

It had to happen sooner or later. Should be "come to", not "cum too". This is at the end of tribbing Azra in the shower.


You cum too in a pool of Azra’s cum, your scaly legs tangled in with your suula lover.

Could be also "You cum, too, in a pool of Azra's cum", as in, you're cooming on where she coomed, too

 

[Jarylan]

Could be also "You cum, too, in a pool of Azra's cum", as in, you're cooming on where she coomed, too

I checked that, but based on context, the PC is regaining consciousness after passing out from pleasure.

 

[LeDoraggo]

I see

 

[Jarylan]

Two more errors I discovered with the yinglet TF.

First, to add to what was said before about breast size reduction, even without lactation, it reduces breast size down to flat. It should stop at C-cup.

Also, the dud/you can't TF anymore message seems MIA. Dunno if that's related to the breast issue or separate.

 

[Jarylan]

Typo in Shekka pregnancy. Unless there's a real clipping issue in TiTS, this should be on, not in.

An abrupt shifting in the weight of your belly causes you to orgasm on the spot! You collapse under the weight of your pregnant pleasure and writhe in the ground until it subsides.