Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!
- Thread starter PanzerGuitar00
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maybe swap the comma with a semicolon or something.
maybe move the hyphen to between eagerly and wriggling.
maybe.... im not sure, tbh, but the hard stop of the question mark just doesnt feel right to me. dealers choice.
You have to take breaks just to catch your breath, lugging around a massive pregnant belly isn't easy. You run your hand over your fluffy fur, soothing down the now-eagerly wriggling child inside you. Why do unborn kids have so much energy? You idly wonder as you feel another soft kick coming from it. After a while of resting, you feel ready to move on again.
The hormones right now are going wild, your pussy is constantly slavering, desperate for cum and creampies. In any idle moments you're fantasizing about big, fat, fuzzy kui-tan balls.
maybe move the hyphen to between eagerly and wriggling.
maybe.... im not sure, tbh, but the hard stop of the question mark just doesnt feel right to me. dealers choice.
You have to take breaks just to catch your breath, lugging around a massive pregnant belly isn't easy. You run your hand over your fluffy fur, soothing down the now-eagerly wriggling child inside you. Why do unborn kids have so much energy? You idly wonder as you feel another soft kick coming from it. After a while of resting, you feel ready to move on again.
The hormones right now are going wild, your pussy is constantly slavering, desperate for cum and creampies. In any idle moments you're fantasizing about big, fat, fuzzy kui-tan balls.
maybe change to: "activating, others, its, you, but you"
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You stagger forward as you double over in pain as your water breaks. Your vagina starts to dilate to help with the passing of your child. Flushed at the timing you make your way as fast as you can to a bathroom, the med-kit bot at the wall automatically activates as you get in a stall and lock the door.
The next several hours pass in a blur, at times seconds feeling like hours and other minutes passing in a blink of an eye. By the end of it, you're red in the face and your body is still aching with tears running down your face, but you have a newborn kui-tan pup in your lap. You bring the small mewling child to your smothering, milk-engorged udders, your child eagerly drinking deeply from your chest.
You brush their still damp fur, sliding a finger over their cheek. It's small hand grabs around your finger, holding tight, making her coo. You'd love to play with your child more, you have to get them to the nursery, and the bot is already on its way. You play and nuzzle with them as much you can in the little time you have, and all too soon, the bot arrives. You place your child inside the protective chamber of it, and give her a gentle kiss on the forehead before the robot takes off, making you hug your chest tightly, the irrational feeling of abandoning your child tearing at your heart, but they're safe in the nursery, and you can't wait to go see them there.
The next several hours pass in a blur, at times seconds feeling like hours and other minutes passing in a blink of an eye. By the end of it, you're red in the face and your body is still aching with tears running down your face, but you have a newborn kui-tan pup in your lap. You bring the small mewling child to your smothering, milk-engorged udders, your child eagerly drinking deeply from your chest.
You brush their still damp fur, sliding a finger over their cheek. It's small hand grabs around your finger, holding tight, making her coo. You'd love to play with your child more, you have to get them to the nursery, and the bot is already on its way. You play and nuzzle with them as much you can in the little time you have, and all too soon, the bot arrives. You place your child inside the protective chamber of it, and give her a gentle kiss on the forehead before the robot takes off, making you hug your chest tightly, the irrational feeling of abandoning your child tearing at your heart, but they're safe in the nursery, and you can't wait to go see them there.